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Wow. Just wow. I think this may have been the longest fanfiction I have ever read... which I somehow managed to read in the span of three days. The plot was not overly complicated and yet it drew me in and kept me interested for what was essentially three days straight. I also don't think I've ever read that many lemons in the one fic! But kudos to you, this was a beautiful story.

Your characterisation was excellent and I really enjoyed your writing style. You made me completely freak out twice; when Naruto was 'caught' by Itachi and when they dropped Naruto off at the police station. I was terrified. There was like 900 PAGES OF SUSPENSE LEADING UP TO BOTH MOMENTS. THE STRESS. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is so sweet and so them, you didn't change their characters at all. They are beautifully damaged characters. I love Itachi so much! I hope to read more about him and Naruto as well as possibly Naruto's birth parents in your sidefics which I am off to read. Soup's On was brilliant from start to finish. Thank you for a wonderful read which I will never forget.

Best wishes,
Naruto Meowzers

Oh baby! I have read this story yhree times in the last few years, and it never fails to kick me right in the feels when I come past it in browsing, however, it's been awhile, and I happened to find you on Tumblr, I'm so excited to have made it back here! Y ou ur writing really makes me happy, and this work is my favorite of yours. Many happy years to you dear, much love for your talent, and may you never lose your muse! I have bonded with so many people thanks to this fic, you've done much for me and I am thankful!
~ ja ne

It's amazing to think that the author of Inked and Soup's On are one and the same! While both incredible in their own right, the writing styles and atmosphere are quite varying. Inked on is more mature and depicts Sasuke's aloofness fantastically while Soup's On gives us a deeper look into his proposed thinking process. I LOVE both stories (maybe with a little bias towards Inked since I've read it 4 times) and I hope you continue writing!

I just read this on ao3 about a month ago! I'm going to re read it!

Ok sure i'll check it. Last notice you said about sidefics, can you go over Karin and Suigetsu's meetings with Naruto? And Iruka meet Naruto day 1 cute would be too.

-Tg

Ps Soz, English not my language a And friend doeesnt help with my reviewed

I just realised something their 15 and having sex.

I'm just putting this out there I apsolotly hat french kissing sense. But they can be very important.

Now only if Itachi would walk in and see them that would be perfect.

I'll be honest I was crying at the end of this chapter I mean the feels at the end are unbelievably strong

this chapter was so cute

Absolutely loved this story so many emotions. Thank you and great job.

Aw poor baby

BITCH! I FUCKING KNEW IT. I WAS GOING TO COMMENT THAT KABUTO DRUGGED HIM BUT I WAS LIKE NAH

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH NARUTO YOU PRECIOUS BEAN ILY

Amazing story and this chapter was perfect.