oh ... this ist well written, but so sad ...

WOW! Heart wrenching. This yanks your heart out, throws it on the ground and stomps on it repeatedly.

You left this at the most perfect spot. It makes you sit and think, wonder and contemplate. Leafing it up to the reader to decide if Jane and Maura will get back together for a meaningful relationship or just eventually drift totally apart.

Brilliant writing!

Just found this story please continue one day

Sad, so sad, but entirely possible. Beautifully written.

Not sure how I

No! You didn't!

GAAAAAD! i need closure IM GONNA DIEEEEE! great fic btw

Omg. This was fantastic! Awesome story!

Don't usually like angsty but this one was good. However I would have liked Janes POV and even better,a happy ending or at least closure.

Please add another chapter! this is too good to leave here,

Well done. Its different to what I've read so far and that's.. a lot.
Deep stuff.
Good one.

See, I don't understand all these other reviewers that want more of this.

The beauty of your works, as heartwrenching as they may be is that they end in the perfect spot. You have this brilliant way with pacing and words that forces the reader through to the end even though we may want, desperately to break away, because we know what's coming (the inevitable, if you will) we have no choice but to continue.

This right here, is gorgeously gut wrenching. You do angst so well. Its just so strikingly beautiful and poignant and...well, wonderful isn't the right word, cause I don't think anything that makes one want to curl up in a little ball with tea and hagen das is wonderful, but you get the idea. Its brilliant.

On no no no. You do NOT get to stop here! I need more closure. Even if they are not lovers, at least Jane's POV?

My dear Prince, you are a compelling author quite adept in presenting plausible alternate Rizzles realities replete with persuasive logical arguments oozing in familiar emotional turmoil. One of my favorite authors, in fact. But I shouldn't have read this story. Not tonight. It is a one sided one shot with no chance of hearing Jane's point of view. Too much like reality. I strongly disagree that it should be marked complete.

There, I've said my peace.

Please remember: you are an excellent author, a seasoned Rizzles bard, one of my favorites. Mission resoundingly accomplished with this tale, gaping wound included.

I've noticed you've posted a lot of new stuff lately. So far this has been my favorite, I feel it's been the most engaging/interesting and I really want to see where it goes.