Can't wait for the next chapter and more Please update soon love this story

bite mark is interesting

Hmm.. Between the last chapter and this one, there seems to be a missing link between what happened with Sakura and Madara. She seemed like she was going to protest in the prev chapter. Did Madara do something?

As for Sasuke.. It looks like he's going to fight Naruto if he can. There's some tension waiting to be released.

Whoa, more snippets here that raise questions than answer them.. And I didn't think Sakura would react this way, perhaps there's more to this than you're letting on?

Don't give up keep this going

Didn't expect this turn of events, neither did I expect that Sasuke would be so frustrated for some reason.

Naruto's not taking any breaks, as usual. Nice to see that you've included him working on stuff behind the scenes.

As for Madara.. How much of his actions is because of the demon, and how much feelings are his own? It's been something that's been going on from the start.. Curious.

The build up! It's killing me!

update soon great chapter wonder is tsunade will ever wake up again

As much as Madara teased her for attempting to find him, he did come to see her first, haha..

I like the manner of speaking you've chosen for him in this fic: arrogant and teasing, very much suited for him. As for him suddenly being so gentle and 'caring'.. hmm suspicious indeed.. And Sakura's blush at the end... He didn't really show it but I imagine that he's affected somehow?

Why would the medic be "reluctant" to heal that part of her? Orders from Madara? Or perhaps knowledge of what's to come after she's recovered?

As much as Madara may tease her for going to find him, he did come to see her too ;)

I like his speech style in this fic: arrogant and darkly playful suits him well. You didn't mention anything in this chapter but I imagine that Sakura's blush would have affected him somehow. He's rather happy about intimacy with her, be it violent or gentle.

Cleaning up shit from when it hit the fan

For a moment I thought it'd be Madara who came to see her first. What can I say, I've been looking forward to more Madara-Sakura interaction in this chapter and that cliffhanger at the end's got me chomping at my screen for more xD

The beginning started out pretty gruesome.. Hope Sakura doesn't have any permanent damage from the burns :( but then again we're talking about a dark story here so as we go deeper down the rabbit hole, more is expected and I'm just as excited as I am worried to know... What's less bearable is the suspense ;) Less bearable in a good way, as well-written stories always do that to readers

Curious about what the medic said about Sakura dooming civilisation.. Since her surrender saved the village, the only way that statement could fit it is if she is a key piece in Madara's grand plan, perhaps more than has been let on in previous chapters? Hmm...

All the best, take care and I'll see you again in the next update... Or you can just PM me anytime haha!

Cheers!
Satsuma-chan

Wow, your writing has definitely improved!

Just post the story, have you read the sites rules?

The fcuk? Is this site turning to blogging? Who cares about your note?