This came out very well. It's always hard to decide how much to write and it's a fine line when you have issues. I think this works well and fits with both characters and the show in general. You write everyone so well.

Hate these kinds of chapters. NEVER do this.

It's a good chapter. Well written and makes sense with both their issues. The attractions been there since they met, but this was a nice way for some of it to come forward. Dean may be a man-whore, but he's a gentleman when it comes to how he treats women.

Odd time to bring Bela in since technically Dean is still somewhat involved with Lisa. He and Bela do have a nice flirty friendship going and an obvious attraction. Great chapters. It's odd with writing out who is talking, but I am getting used to that and the story itself is good enough to overlook that.

I really liked what you did with this AU. I usually don't care for fics written script style, but the story line sold kept me reading. I was happy to find a good Bela story. I always felt she was unfairly judged and misunderstood. They really limited her character, so I like any fic that redeems her and makes sense.

God damn. This was a long, winding road, but the ending made it all worth it. I think you captured the spirit of every character, especially Dean's adorably weird sense of humor, and stayed true all the way through. Hell was positioned perfectly in this story - not too damaging, but damaging enough to bring Bela & Dean together. Balthazar, Cas, and Crowley were all enjoyable (I could really visualize all their scenes!), Sam's soullessness and subsequent struggles flowed really well, and I even found myself imagining the interactions between Alec, Delia, and their parents. The snippets of those two were just perfect! Really how I would imagine their children (and Bela's baking skills lol). Overall, I was hooked until the end and can only say GREAT job!

I do like the story so far, but honestly this should not be rated K. At the very least, it should be T, and the best rating for this would be M, due to the minor smut in this chapter (24).

It sounds interesting

DONE!
Good story

Now that was a curve ball!

It wasn't awful...interesting definitely.

I do like that you brought her long hair back!

Wait Ok I am still a bit iffy about exact details of season six, but did Castiel really say he didn't know who brought Sam back?

I don't know if I am fan of short hair Bella but still good chapter...me like

I really like the dynamic between Dean and Bela!

I actually liked how you manage to bring Bela into the story line without changing it.

It was a really good read and I love Bela (sigh)!

I wanted to bring Bela back myself but I see you beat me to the punch.

Next time when you right a fanfic can you use quotations when someones talking rather than the
Random Person:
Because its really hard to read like that not saying this to hate but just a suggestion I really love the story though

This story was crap! And we all hate bela cause she was a bitch and I'm glad she's dead and not in the show anymore!and your retared bitch for writing this crappy story and it was crap! This story was dumb and who ever liked this is retared! Bye bitches!