hey this is a great, beautiful, amazing story for your first job you have been fantastic. continues to write that it is a pleasure to read you. helen and will are so sweet i love them together. please another story?

I don't normally fancy Will/Helen, but this was cute, I like "first times" with some couples. To be quite frank with you darling, this was one of the hottest things I've read in a while...

A very good story. Hot, sweet and sexy. Very well done! I love your style! And hope to read a new story very soon!

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that was freaking HOT! well done :D

ahhhhhhh you posted it! you have not gone postal! I love this story, its hot and its sexy and love love love and you already know what I think about it.

yay! I'm so happy!