oh yeah loved it and do make another story its great and have you ever thought of making it in to a book

it was agreat story even though had a few speling mistakes

I loved it!

Please write a sequel! It's excelent! Perfect(nearly perfect)! Just write a sequel please...

that was a good story. i actually liked the character you made up. kelsie really appealed to me and i liked that you made her alex's half-sister. it was cool.

WOW! GREAT STORY! i enjoyed reading that! looking forward to your other stories

Goddess, how sweet! The George part is sad but how could you get rid of George otherwise since he really does (did) love Alanna. Kelsie was right to try and get Jon and Alanna back together. I like the ending. Keep writing!

good.

Wow, I can't believe I actually finished this. I actually am happy with how this story turned out, too. That's shocking, since I usually hate everything that I write.

Luved it! But then again, I like NE thing A/J!

That was a very *choke* nice story...sry I didn't review earlyer

wow.. you cannot imagine how wierd it is reading this. my name is kelsey, though not spelled exactly the same, close enough. i actually do look like your physical description of her. green eyes, brownish-blonde hair. moreover- i prolly would have taken the same path of action. alanna and jon always were supposed to be together. but the WIERDEST thing of all: i actually like someone named matt. how very odd.

excellent story, i must say. i liked it a rather lot. you ought to do even more a/j fics. yahh. :)

yes, yes, YES! that was the perfect ending! it was kinda sad with george dying and everything, but it was still really good! please write a sequel, i wanna kno what happens to kelsie and matthew! and please make kelsie say yes if u write one! anyway, this fic was totally awesome, please write more!

incredible. you found a way to actually make them right for each other...that's awesome.

poor, poor george. and thayet. i really can't see jon saying that though...confiding in them that he still loves alanna. well, it's fic alright. another good chapter.