Reviews for Disappear
inuyasha16451 chapter 4 . 5/10
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
god of all chapter 4 . 6/20/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
picabone99 chapter 4 . 12/31/2014
I like the idea behind this story, and the thought you had in how to mesh up the timelines(it's something I enjoy looking for when I do crossovers as well), but I'm hoping that you will consider re-writing it with a bit more time taken for the story. I would love to re the setup for how nico and harry met up, even if you simply told it in a series of mini stories over the course of one chapter. it would help to set their characters and why we, as readers, should care about them.
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
you need to work on length.
NicoLuvRockAngel chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
Love the plot just make sure to check for spelling and grammar ;)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
mmmm

Kaito is hungry want to eat
midnight rose112358 chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
love the story. Now longer chapters please.
If you would I would LOVE to read a femHarry as a daughter of Thantos story. There must be a love interest, preferably Percy Weasly or a son of Apollo. Include a big rant about cheating death from Thantos, Hades and thier sons as well as one from Hecate in front of one or more gods would be preferable. Whole council if you can manage it. Phobos and Demos must make an apaerence. I cannot stress this enough.
I realy hope you write thins for me, plotline do with it what you will, just make sure there are my points in there.
P.S. have fem harry be named Katarina and have her smack someone, Voldy or Malfy I'm not picky, with a frying pan. Always wanted to read their reactions to that punishment.
itsjustanothernerd chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
put percy in it. you said you would do anything! hahaha! No seriously, I really want to see atleast a smidgen of percy in this story. Your chap length is fine, but i always love long chapters!
WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
Please make the chapters longer. It is good to see that Harry is getting back up instead of staying down.
NumberFourPrivetDrive chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
Longer chapters please. But I still love the story. Very unique plotline indeed.

Merry aka I HATE YOU AND YOUR DADDY
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
Dang, way too brief.
yuediangelo chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Oh,espero que melhore logo. :)
Esta bem curta.
Esta bem escrita e com conteúdo.
Estou curiosa para saber a continuação.
Espero que esteja bem e não seja nada grave.
Melhoras.
:)
Harpygirl24 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Great chapter, please update.
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
Yep, Harry is going to be forever hunted and haunted by Voldemort. If I was him I would hide in the underworld for a while.
headtofu chapter 2 . 12/1/2012
:D coudld u have hermione do the quest with Nico? And make her a demigod? Pleaseee
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