That's what you get for spying bro, lol. Epic fic. :-D

I read this one on AO3, as you had alluded that some parts were left out... :P
I was simply CACKLING through the whole thing. James being James with his comments, his commentary on the whole thing. With his addendum on where they were, to his comments about being confused with the whole cross-species thing. It was perfect. Even Garrus's second wave of embarrassment to even kiss her, and then to ... walk her to her quarters. Amazing. Super great. Aughg.

Great job on mixing hot and fluffy parts! :)

Died of laughter xD thanks. Mourn meee xD

DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING
That was a combination of shocking, hot, and hilarious. I absolutely love it and will most certainly chec AO3 for the full version.b
8.5/10

This was nothing less than amazing, and I may have to go look up the original now. Perfection!

Aww... I really liked it. It was much fluffier than I thought it would be, which is nice. More please. :D

Oh wow, just enough fluff, and no OOC. I wasn't expecting this fic to be so GOOD. I mean, what with the onlooker James' POV thing. You should definitely do more work on these two, this here fic has just made my day. Thanks for a beautiful read.

I really loved this. The humor, and James's POV, really make the story.

I read this on the kinkmeme, loved it, saved it. It's one of the hottest, funniest ME stories. Too bad you had to edit it for here, but it's still awesome. :)

I absolutely loved this. Even if it was edited, it was still perfect. I laughed at several parts and the last two sentences was definitely one of them. I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing!