I got a good one -

Knockout is not a peacock. Neither is Starsceam.

Shiloh is not impressed with the former. The latter…
Have fun with that!

I would actually like this story back. I really like Rules to Keep You Alive as it is very comedic and I have grown quite fond of the characters and their antics (mostly Shiloh getting in trouble). So, yeah. I would like if you kep this story and continued it.

I love this story; it's made me laugh many times. However, there are two rules/scenarios which bothered me. First off, Rule #242. Starscream is in fact the fastest Seeker ever created which is partly why he got given the position of Air Commander and he would hands down win any race, even against his own trinemates. Second, Rule #254. Starscream was a scientist and is incredibly intelligent. He may act idiotic at times but he is not stupid at all. Apart from that, really enjoyed this fic

Yes, I think that we all want to stay.

The ending was brilliant, as always, and I loved the two chapters before. Hearing things from the 'Cons POV was amusing. Hope you're well, Dusk :)

Oh almost forgot

GOD BLESS

Upset! UPSET! UPSET! I'm..I'm...actually ok with that you left and came back no big deal. The important thing is you enjoy writing and we enjoy your stories that's all. Soooooo welcome back

Yeah, a sequel would be nice but it is up to you. I really enjoyed this, just saying. Keep up the good work!

Love the epilogue. I look at your collection and know I want more. Styles morph into another. Seasons change. So, Let it go and become one with the wind and sky (sorry). Try some new candy like Toxic Waste bubble gum or Zotz or if you really want to freak the cassette twins out try Evil Twins by Trolli. Maybe you will look back at this and see it as a motivational poster for your next masterpiece work for theater. It was a good run.

Also, do you want to hide a body - it doesn't have to be in one piece (parody of similar name song from Frozen that will grate your nerves if you don't work with little children)? You have no idea how many times I have heard those songs.

I would love to see a sequel and im SOOOO happy your back! keep em comming i gotta have SOMETHING to read...

I would totally go for a sequel And welcome back, darling! I've missed you! *hugs* How've things been?

Awww! Sorry to hear that.. but it was always a joy to read your fiction! I hope you do get a sequel going!

Elsewise.. I'm a gonna need to find some other way.. to entertain myself.. Now where.. did I put that Cyberization virus?

I missed you!
A sequel would be awesome!
Keep up the awesome work :)

I'm not upset with you! This is your life, your decisions, and I'm just glad you're back! I think a sequel might be a good idea, but it's up to you. :)

Thanks for the story and great job!

It's alright when it is time to go it is time to go. I enjoyed reading this story.

GOD BLESS

love ur story!