Reviews for Imperfection
candrariski155 chapter 4 . 7/12
I really hope Naruto folded like a real robot because he is an Android but what I read is just another version of Naruto Canon that makes me bored. sorry I had to stop reading.
Cloud Narukami chapter 28 . 6/9
Using lines from DBZA is cool and all but come one don't use the same lines too many times it just makes it all seem so cheesy.
Yushin1831 chapter 14 . 5/28
Huh, its even worse than the original dbz, instead of training to get stronger, to win against a stronger opponent, its basically just the author sacrificing characters to give Naruto a substantial power boost, and a little edgy character development, and after they do that, he reverts back to his base(former) mindset, clearly not caring of his so called character development, he knew cell was a fucking cockroach, yet he gave HIM a fucking chance? idk if his fucking idiocracy multiplied due to having saiyan genes or its just for the sake of the authors plot armor, which is prettt fucking useless to be honest, tsk
smolhauz chapter 1 . 5/15
The numbers would have worked well if there wasnt already a android 21. And its a girl. Nice.
Enclave1 chapter 15 . 4/24
STAR WARS REFERENCE!
Issei ODR chapter 6 . 4/3
Wow entonces naruto tendría un diseño parecido a súper androide 17 con su cabello rubio rojizo.

Además de tener el aura sayayin de nivel 2
Guest chapter 17 . 1/31
This chapter just killed the story for me am out
The-Raging-Maelstrom45 chapter 6 . 1/29
okay i have a lot of problems with this story. but im just going to state a major one. first off naruto's powers dont make since. other than his own abilities everything else is just stupid. You stated in the first chapter yourself that D created Naruto without infusing him with other warriors cells like cell. yet you show just a few chaptwrs ahead that naruto is using kaioken and you state in chapter 6 very early in the chapters that that he has cells from saiyans and that its being activated. Then you give him a bullshit ability like mimicry and he processes the Kamehameha in literally a second of using it as well as the kaioken. this doesn't make since. the reason why the sharingan can copy jutsus and taijutsu is because it tracks the movements of the body and copies the handsigns. its why you can't just look at a Kamehameha or kaioken and mimic it immediately. Ki doesnt utilize handsigns and concentrates energy in a specific way from inside the body.
Santan Suprah chapter 4 . 1/29
their relationship developed faster than NaruHina in The Last
Chronosign chapter 2 . 1/22
Will Naruto absorb perfect cell.
Guest chapter 29 . 1/20
Type your review writer just die please
Guest chapter 28 . 1/20
Type your review drop dead wrjter
Maurz chapter 5 . 1/21
fuck this story.
ShadowSnake22 chapter 29 . 1/4
I loved this story I cant wait for an update.
ankitmahat chapter 4 . 12/30/2019
God! This forced romance drama thing between 18 and Naruto is cringy as fuck.
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