I’ve read this before. It’s as beautiful now as the first time I read it.

Thank You

Love it

Wow you are an amazing writer :)

Wow, a new prospective on the roof top scene. Very perceptive. Always sort of wondered why he hadn't push her off...Really enjoy your writing style.

Best Always fic I have read. Hands down. Thank you for this.

Your story was delightful! It brought such justice to Caskett. Thank you. Please keep writing.

Wish there as more. Loved your story.

Super sexy story. Whew! We'll done. Also, it's now my head cannon that Beckett's tattoo is that Tolstoy quote.

This story is excellent from start to finish. I love the connection between them and how tangible you portray it. There's a lot of sweet moments throughout the fic, the feeling of them being new and in awe of each other and their feelings, very well done. Really loved this, well done.

I don't generally swear but damn, damn, damn, damn, damn, damn, damn! One for each chapter. I need a glass of cold water now. Nice fic and excellent storytelling.

Oooh, that was soo nice! I agree with other comments that this could easily be the "After Always" that DID happen - only lacks 'the part where I...', but considering you wrote this before the season premiere I'd say you got all the other parts more than right. ;)
I liked that it was both sweet and hot, with their respective recap of events and evaluation of feelings in the middle. Thanks for the great read, this ranks right up there with my favorite Always stories!

How have I not read this before? It was beautiful. You have created the path I hoped they had taken. So good.
You are a writer par excellence

Hot. Sweet. Sexy. Wonderful. Absolutely perfect! And so many other words...

This is my favorite story about their first night together. It is an incredible display of your talent for storytelling and character development. Thank you.