It's so heartbreaking that Artemis thinks it's her sister coming home, only for the situation to go from that to such a traumatic event. I actually really liked her interactions with Sportsmaster in this, even though he's a horrible person, but he must have had SOME paternal moments towards Artemis or she'd have ended up a very different person from the Artemis we know in the show. The scene where he convinces her to let go of the knife because she's been in survival-mode and hasn't thought to let go of her weapon yet was excellent. Nicely done!

~Amulet

very dark...but I liked it

Ooooh, yikes! This is awful. The situation, I mean. Geez, if she'd had a regular family they'd have reassured her that it was self defense. But obviously... *sigh*
As freaky as this is, though, you did a wonderful job. You captured Artemis's feelings perfectly.

...kinda depressing...i like it

this was so good

An amazing story, between Artemis and her father.

legit just cried. damn you, that was exactly the type of awful it should have been.
poor bby artemis ;_;

Love it B)

Dang twisted and dysfunctional but he does love her

I love showing that he does love his family

Poor bebe Artemis. :c But very excellent story-telling. From her perspective and her emotions. Instead of referring to the blood as blood, it is "red" or "the sticky red". Very child-like words to put it.

That was amazing. Simply amazing.

Wow. Amazing.