woah. that chapter with benn was hard.
you have to say somebody is really slow if luffy figured it out first.
like snail-slow.
no, more like half-dead-ancient-grandpa-snail-slow.
i wanted to throw something at benn's head too,
the fight was heart-rending to read.
good story. though i'm a bit confused about the references as i didn't read "kill the rabbit" before.
but it's interesting anyway.

Really like this story. I kind of want to know if you stop writing this story ? Because I like it a lot.

I love this shit!

Poor Benn... Paranoia is getting to his head...
Lovely story!
Some things are a bit vague but that is probably because I haven't read "Kill the rabbit"
I hope to see more soon!

BEN! JUST ARRRGH! WHY ARE YOU SO FUCKING DENSE BEN! AHHRRRG!

Lolz, so dense. But wait, this story can't be complete! The main issue has yet to be resolved! And we haven't heard anything from or about little Ace or the changes in time! Are we just to assume that Ace stayed on Shank's ship playing with luffy for the rest of his years? And little Ace may or may not be growing up in the future? Hmmm, no good. Well the story was good. But this is no good. This must be resolved as soon as possible!

Favorite quote:

"Bone structure doesn't lie!"

Awesome!~

I am laughing soo hard!

YESSS
Beeeennnnnn stahp XD

marco. going bald. i-omg

MARCO'S PICTURE IS BEAUTY

I realized there was a pie question I never answered... So, cheese cake pie. Yes, cheese cake shaped as a pie. There are very few deserts or sweets I eat. Sheppard's pie might count, but I only like that sometimes and if made a certain way... So Meh.

Also, its quite common for me to use Shared Docs. In fact, a friend and I have a fan fiction account we cowrite on that uses that method. It was probably a bad idea, we tend to feed each other's insanity. Not to mention all the other uses, I adore it.

-sits dejectedly in a corner- I can't even fold a square, much less anything more complicated. Lost more than a bit of dexterity in my hands due to an accident a few years back, not that I could do origami in the first place. I did manage to regain my ability to play piano, but not to the same extent and harps are out of the question.

Poor Ace. I'm pretty sure time travel gives everyone a headache, but Luffy on top of it? I pity him in a way.

Haha Benns dense-ness is cracking me up! I'd love to read more if there is more. :)

-Yvonne

LMAO. Benn is sooo dense. Loved the story. You have to continue it pleeaase. It is so funny. At least until the aces return to their places