Reviews for Worlds Apart (Companion Piece 6) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wanted to hit Scorpius ! Normaly I love him but here I hated him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scorose...so cute it hurts! Haha, they're very interesting in this. A lot of people make it seem like Malfoy (Draco) is a totally different person, and that Scorpius is just easygoing and completely against his family's views. This is more realistic, he still has those prejudices, but less so than his father. I also love how this is a normal, friendly conversation with just the dialogue, but I can just see Rosie's face falling as she hears him talk about other girls. Very true to form on how the characters are in your main story, so good job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how you do these companion pieces! They really add to the story line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I'd like to read more hopefully you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. That last statement could have been meant in a couple of different ways... Sorry! I know it was friendship/humour, but I totally ship SorpiusxRose so I basically read into everything... I love this, though. They're so sweet even just as friends, and it was interesting to see Scorpius influenced by his upbringing. Most writers just sort of skate over that- they're just like "oh yeah they are perfect for each other end of story." And I ADORE your style of writing. I could just read your conversation stories all day long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, squee! I don't traditionally ship these two, but you sort of have to when they're this adorable, in all their innocence and arguing ways, just like Ron and Hermione in the early days! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh typical Malfoy! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like to think that Draco and Astoria did love each very much. Maybe showing it differently than Ron and Hermione but certainly not as muted as you described it. HOwever I found that it worked well as a contrast between the two and I enjoyed reading the conversation. |