Reviews for The Lateness of the Hour |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for next update ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want to chuckle everytime I hear Paul call Harry"Lover". It reminds me of Eric from Southern Vampire Mysteries. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, this fic is occasionally good, but you've got everyone's personalities jumping around wildly. You also have them rediscover the same thing over and over. Once you have someone figure something out you should make a note of it so they don't sound stupid by being confused about something they've already figured out later on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Separate your paragraphs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your The Lateness of the Hour story. It is really amazing and interesting. I really love to read more about it. It had been 8 years since your last update on the story. Please don't stop writing this story! I really want to read more of it. I love it. Please continue to update the story! |
![]() ![]() ... Seriously... Like Esma did the most damage and hurt harry the most aside from Edward the fuck? |
![]() ![]() This was a great chapter! Up until Harry hugged that bitch Esma and forgave her. Now im just angry and annoyed lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will there be a continuation please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF if they threw you out without a second thought, then they don't deserve you |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh come on Its hard to swallow that you've made him such a shortie (most authors of fanfic do to enhance his submissiveness or girlieness, because you know, can't be gay without looking small and submissive) but I thought he was done with the teen angst drama, running out of a meeting like that screams teen angst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of this story, and how it could have been. But, well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great work too. Keep your great work of art. Thank you and Please, Terri |
![]() ![]() KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
![]() ![]() I like the story and can't wait to know what happens next hope you update |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool update soon thanks |