Reviews for Doomed from the Start
Guest chapter 12 . 1/12/2014
You haven't updated in like 6 months but I hope u do! The grammar is not bad.
i am a Fire-jay chapter 12 . 4/29/2013
Uh-oh...
charliesunshine chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
and update your other story as they are both amazing
charliesunshine chapter 12 . 4/28/2013
ahhh you have to update really soon I am dying to know what happens please update. maybe her mother could get captured or they could be separated from the others. I'm glad prim and cato are sort of a couple, please update
Guest chapter 12 . 4/24/2013
Soo good please keep going
HeyBirdy chapter 12 . 4/24/2013
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! I loved katniss in this chapter lol :D
canadianboy98 chapter 11 . 4/10/2013
I'm loving this story! Pls update soon!
charliesunshine chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
well done quick update, glad they are finally together ish and katniss and peeta, yay please update again soon
FirePearl97 chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
Yay a new chapter so soon! Loved it:) and they kissed! Awe! Don't worry, I'm not too good at writing Romantic scenes either, they are hard! Can't wait for the next chapter!
the-hooded-figure2 chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
Wow that was quick
I am really looking forward to what will happen next
I think I've already said this but this is a completely different idea an I think it is great :D
ThisGirl12 chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
Oh my gosh! I am so happy you updated so soon! I loved this chapter, I am so happy for them lol :D I know Katniss will warm u to them later. :)
muggle39 chapter 11 . 4/7/2013
Great chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Love it! :D
FirePearl97 chapter 10 . 4/7/2013
Awe great job! I'm so glad they are sort of warming up to each other now, so cute! Great job. Can't wait for the next one. !
charliesunshine chapter 10 . 4/7/2013
yay the was a sweet chapter I am so happy so started updating again
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