i loved this story soo much... bases on the old lore but damn it was good. can wait to read the sequel

your first fanfiction is the second most favourited league fanfic lol
nice story, deserves those hundreds of favs

great history I liked a lot

wow the part of the discussion with the king was so well handled, at first I was inclined to agree with the king because his argument is so justified but then jarvan's argument easily turned the table. Really well done for such a short scene. For not portraying the king as a complete monster.

Growing up, I've never been a fan of books, could never get into them, I've tried popular names and titles but nothing ever could grab my attention for longer than an hour. This story had me captivated from page 1. This was such an epic journey that had me laughing out loud in one part, then in tears in another part. I could feel my heart pounding in the heartfelt moments with Kat and Garen. I'm not even a romance kind of guy, but I loved Kat so much in league, and thought all the hints at the Garen relationship were cool, so turned to fanfic, and I could not believe how happy I was to find this. To me, this is the canon universe that I believe I'm in when I play League of Legends now. I got so excited to read the sequel to this and was just as captivated, but it turned to depression when I realized it would never be finished, so I refuse to take Walk the Line as a continuation until it is. You are an incredible writer, you paint a picture with your words and they are felt with the heart. If you ever read this, thank you so much for this masterpiece, and I hope you are enjoying whatever it is you have moved on to. Love, your dear reader.

Just well written and a good story loved it

I'm heartbroken for Jarvan T_T he deserved a happy ending! I kinda wish the king had had something more coming for him than a cushy retirement tho, haha. Ugh. The culmination of all of the lives and deaths and everything was extraordinary tho! I wonder what happened to zilean. Looking forward to that sequel!

Gotta fight with that dang armored bear OMG ZILEAN YOU GLORIOUS. And you glorious author for orchestrating this amazingly. Like, damn. I skipped work today so I could read this. DAMN! 3

So I know this is 5 years old but like. I haven't giggled with glee at a fanfic for a long time. Oh man. When Kat was like "is thinking hard for you?" and talon was like "nah" at saying hi and the whole "yipee/fuck you" exchange was just PERFECT. Also idk what it was all before but this all has felt really natural and good so far! Which is useless critique for how long this has been posted, but I'm having fun :D

Why are chemical burns always associated with acids? A base can do the exact same thing.

Polygraphs being unreliable is an understatement. They are better than flipping a coin, that's really it. Polygraphs were never designed or proven to work as lie detectors, and the creator of the polygraph, John Augustus Larson was horrified by law enforcements excessive and unscientific use of his device, calling it, "a Frankenstein's monster."

Polygralhs are not accepted as evidence in court because of how unreliable it is, with it's main use being to trick people into confessing, even if they are innocent. In 2014, Jeffrey Deskovic won more than 40 million dollsrs after DNA evidence exonerated him, even though he confessed after a failed polygraph.

Yeah but I kind of like to watch porn while eating dried cum. It is quite tasty and has a rather peculiar ensemble of flavours. This piece of writing makes me horny.

Hello
i wanted to say that i really love your story! i made this account to tell you thati will write more reviews as soon as possible Thank you for your great story

I don't usually post reviews. I know I should. I also Knox you haven't posted in years but it's okay.
I read this fic years ago, and I discovered it again with your rewrite of the start.
I like it, it was way better imho. Because consent is sexy.

I have to admit this chapter almost get me to tears at Cass funerals. I don't know why, I don't even like her so much. But her family saying so kind words was heartbreaking. Thank you.

Take care. :)

What a great story definiatly a gem, god the deaths of the champions were just heartbreaking 9/10