OHMYFUCKINGFEELS.
DO A FOLLOW-UP. TEREZI FINDING OUT KK WENT AND FOUGHT ENGLISH, AND HAVE HER RUN TO HIM AS HE'S DYING, BEGGING TO KNOW WHY HE'S SUCH A FUCKING IDIOT.
DO IT. I DON'T KNOW WHY MY FEELS SAY THAT'S A GREAT FUCKING IDEA, BUT DO IT ANYWAY.

That ending I cant.

Ive spent the last half hour just reading all of these and you're a really talented writer. Wow.

What? WHAT?
THAT WAS GORGEOUS, DON'T END IT THERE!
I WILL ROLL AROUND IN MY OWN TEARS.

Wow. I really like how you write Meenah, and also how she interacts with Karkat. And Karkat's rant about Terezi is just...perfect and adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thus is just so perfect and sad t the same time like as if the actual update didn't leave me dead , you just topple things over the edge. This is just a really brilliant and effective story and I would deeply enjoy more like this from you. The characterisation was mainly brilliant as well! But wouldn't Meenah say 'Cod' instead of God, I'm probably wrong , sorry .

OMMGGOD THIS IS KALHJAHKJAFH
I LOVED THAT CUTE MOMENT WITH THE BRAID (I semi ship these two but karezi is my OTP)
Are you continuing this? If you do include more Meenah/ Karkat moments (make Karezi jealous.
Okay you dont have to do that but I love thiis omg

update thiiiis!3333

so what happens next? do they die or live or just shrugs everything off and just go live happily in a dream bubble, the happy fiddling end? I NEED TO KNOW SO MAKE THIS TWO PARAGRAPHS ... PLEASE. This is the first fan fic that told terezi's and dave's relationship as it is, although if you see it from dave's side, it also changes, but more importantly, how karkat feels, i feel my fangirl soul yearning for karkat more now, poor karkat, i mean, hes so nice under everything that he has done and trying to make up for and the facade he keeps up for everything wrong that afflicts his friends, and ugh, im a mess of feels, clean me up with a second chapter...