ich mag diesen oneshot. unbedingt. ich liebe den schluss, das mittendrin und insgesamt alles. vielen dank fürs teilen. lg hayne

Sorry hated the ending tony is a field agent not a sit on his ass and watch everyone else do the hard work kind of guy his always hated sitting behind a desk bad ending to a good story

Enjoy this story every time I read it! Tony would make an excellent director.

Great story.

thank you

Love it x

Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side.

good job

MUITO BOM!

Oh This story is one of your best. I would love to see how Tony does at his new job and how the trio end up getting.

Please fix the first sentence of this story. The first sentence of a story needs to be understandable; the first sentence should have the readers asking themselves a question. I won't read this story because the first sentence is terrible, which says to me (and other readers) that you're not a good writer. I have read some of other stories; you have the potential to be a good writer if you would correct your grammar and other bad writing habits. If you're ever inclined to rewrite your stories, I can help.

i love this. thats all i have to say.

Great read
I really enjoyed it
Great write!
Kudos
Blade

Wow! That was a great story! Poor Tony! But everything came out great in the end! :D

Awesome story! Loved it! Glad their was a happy ending! Its writers like you that make life worthwhile! Thank you for that! Have a blessed day! :)

Not a fan of the Terrible Trio, are you? Great story. Thanks for sharing.

Wow, this was some perfect story. I am not much into Tim or Ziva so this one really made me read it in one breath. Excellent piece really, so much love for Tony and well deserved. I could not help but wish that SECnAVs decision really came true, it would have been so awesome )
This is a well written piece, especially all the talks and calls, they are really masterwork. I enjoyed the reading very much, thank you ) Make more of those, could you? )