A pegasus not having wings is an earth pony, they are pretty common. Just saying.

Is discord going to be in this?

You posted Chapter 12

aw, man i can't pm you so you can use my oc. '-' oh well, from what i've read its good, to the next chaptah

WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED THIS STORY I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER I NEED IT!

Its awesome. I cant wait for your next update. SO UPDATE!

Hello their. I like to submitt my oc. My name is Jonathan and this is my oc: Flutter Night. He's a unicorn stallion, coat color is white, mane and tail color is black blue with a white line, blue eyes, and his cutie mark is a Black Moon. His personality is that he's nice and friendly to other ponies, but mostly shy. He has a crush on Twilight Sparkle. Theirs more info on my oc, but its very secretive... so if you wanna know more about him... I guess I can give you my cell phone number: 2103281827. It would be nice to talk to other pegasisters and bronies once in awhile. Peace.

I hope that you'll update this again soon, m'dear!

I like it! :DDDD

:D Mechanical wings? That's original, and I like it! Please continue the wonderful work!

I like this! :D And her cutie mark sounds pretty awesome!

This was worth the wait! And I am currently watching season 3 on You Tube. Oh great work!

Awesome chapter! I am loving this story.

Hey can you name the colt echo hart.(characteristics) gold and blue fur. Shy but adventureus. Good at healing wounds.

This was wirth the wait! I really enjoy this fic. Keep up the amazing work!