This is perfection! you portrayed Link so perfectly I'm crying. I've always thought that people overlook all the tagedy link goes through because of his 'chosen destiny.' it's so unfair and heartbreaking. I LOVE Navi's reactions it was so on point! loved this so much thank you for sharing!

I did not expect what I got when I opened this story. I would expect this from two, maybe three other authors on this site. The depth, the gravitas, the emotion, the exact match of Link's character, how completely perfectly it fits in as a deleted scene...it's all perfect.

This is one of the most beautifully written stories I've ever read.

I...I really can't say anything more after that.

Keep up the incredible work!

This was some pretty powerful stuff that I just read. I got a little teary eyed.

Wow, awesome story! I enjoyed it quite a bit!

Great job!

great story. really deep, sad ending. that's what i expected.

sequel please this is so sad that i want a sequel to make things right or at least for Link poor bastard

write it from the goddess pont of view

This was a really deep story. Aside from the very few spelling errors, this was a perfect one shot angst story. Bravo.

That was so beautiful and touching. Very well writen. You're amazing.

I should stop reading tragedies, because they always make me cry or just really sad, but tragedies are just so intresting to read. I really love this story, it makes me sad that Saria is dead. I wonder how she died.