Reviews for The Coming Darkness
Shadowmane2001 chapter 18 . 8/14
Very good Chapter The plot and story is coming along Very very nicely!
Heart of the Demons chapter 18 . 8/8
I was mostly impressed with David's character this chapter. He's still an enigma for sure, and there's a lot he'll need to take in while being a guest in New Thundera. He knows Sho and hates Lisker, and it's obvious there's gonna be some tension between him, his fellow Guyvers, and the ThunderCats. I'm absolutely loving how detailed your "ThunderCats/Guyver" crossover series is.
Mr.G77 chapter 17 . 7/7
Holy mimosa's! I have missed quite a few chapters here and things are getting real interesting now! What the heck is Agito up to now? How is Aptom going to get out of this one now that he is discovered, but then again being the ultimate survivor and most advanced lost number I think he can handle himself unless "Ratso's" got some kind of crazy containment device added to the fact revival of the zoanoids is the worst option ever, and now we got Mon-star on the horizon and the silverhawks got their metal ass's handed to them big time and I cannot wait for sho to go Gigantic, sorry about the late review on your awesome story, life got crazier than usual and the COVID 19 is not helping at all either...
Heart of the Demons chapter 17 . 4/20
Nice job of writing out each point of view this chapter. David seems to be even more of a mystery than Sho and Lisker are. I look forward to how David's character is continually developed throughout this story. Claudus's lament about past and present events adds a lot to his own character. Great scene with the SilverHawks as well. There's just so much going on with everybody that I'm DYING to know what's gonna happen next for them.
atsik101 chapter 16 . 8/14/2019
Man oh man! EVERY time I read a new chapter of this story it's getting better and better and I can't wait to see Sho use the Guyver Gigantic to his full size to take out the dreadnought when it comes to incinerate the Theard Earth with his megasmasher!
Heart of the Demons chapter 16 . 8/13/2019
This is a pretty gutwrenching chapter you've posted, my friend. I appreciate having read it. The depth of each character is ever present, most definitely of Sho, Lisker, and David. You know how to write drama really well, as the ramifications of the Guyver prophecy weighs heavily on everybody. The shades of gray you're constantly providing for your shared "ThunderCats/Guyver" universe is a welcome change of pace from the status quos of both franchises.
Mr.G77 chapter 15 . 5/10/2019
No Words... No words to describe how awesome you have made this story, should have brought a dictionary or something... You have truly done your homework on the Guyver series and Thundercats and I am not at all disappointed! :)

Sorry I havent checked in on your awesome chapter creations for a while, this story got me convinced to read the Guyver manga and man oh man it was one badass read!
I completely forgot that one story where Sho's disembodied arm turned into that biobooster mutant, very well done adding that!
The battle with Silverhawks was incredible and nerve wracking, you had my adreneline going on this chapter you made, very great job!

If I were the Silverhawks I wouldnt tangle with Sho or going near his family/friends anytime soon or later..
Honestly I thought he was about to go Gigantic or Gigantic exceed and just annihilate the Sliverhawks and be done with them.
Silverheart that was a very poor choice you made right there shooting at his family like that.

I gotta say I love the Guyver 4 character you brought in, dont if hes your OC or actual character I have yet to discover but I like him alot! How he called out Lisker and all his info on him was just Badass to the max!
I thought he was just gonna say that awesome line and then straight up terminate his ass right then and thereXD

I hope to see more of David Jackson in the future and to see a good reunion between him and Sho:)

I also cant help but wonder what ol' Aptom might be up to and when Sho might realize he is still active, will they be back as friend like in the manga or enemies when they first met? I await to see your next amazing creation when you can get to it. :)

Finally that bit about the spirits of good messing with Agito's plans was hilarious and brillaint XD Sucks for you Agito!... although I hope his unit does not leave him too soon, last thing space feline hitler Grune needs is a bioboost upgrade..
Anyhow keep up the fantastic work your really doing a magnificent job on this story and all its characters I hope to see your next chapter soon X)
Heart of the Demons chapter 15 . 5/7/2019
Lotsa stuff happening in this chapter that I really had a blast reading. The mystery surrounding the reawakened David runs as deep as ever, and the fight with the SilverHawks really got me hyped. I appreciate you not giving up on this wonderful fic you're writing up on.
Shadowmane2001 chapter 15 . 5/6/2019
Oh Great Chapters thus far.

I will say it now. I do not envy Jagara and Mumm-Rana explaining this to the Thunder cats.
Heart of the Demons chapter 14 . 3/24/2019
The drama is incredibly nonstop here. I'm sorry I never got to the new chapter sooner. Sho regaining a little more of his memories is a highlight I enjoyed the most.
Heart of the Demons chapter 13 . 2/7/2019
Well, my friend, you've delivered on your story's continuing development. The aftermath of Pumyra and Siberias' experiment gone berserk, the scenes of the scenes with Sho and his crew (including his dynamic with Lisker), the SilverHawks' eventual arrival on Third Earth, Ratar-O's contemplation of godhood, and Sho's team's entry to New Thundera are all well executed. Your "Guyver/ThunderCats" universe has plenty to offer, and I for one will NEVER miss out.
Shadowmane2001 chapter 12 . 1/19/2019
I thoroughly enjoy the story series and am very glad I was able to help you with your muse!
Heart of the Demons chapter 12 . 1/18/2019
Very intense indeed. You've delivered a pretty solid installment of "The Coming Darkness" that ratcheted things up for our heroes. Each viewpoint is fantastic and captures the characters wonderfully.
Heart of the Demons chapter 11 . 12/7/2018
So much stuff happening. Commander Stargazer musing about Mon*Star and the SilverHawks, Mumm-Rana and Jagara's little journey reaching its conclusion, Sho and WilyKat providing some info to Lisker, Meliz getting a chance to shine, and Pumyra and Siberias' experiment going wrong truly captivated me. You, Knight Writer, are still in the fanfic game. :)
Shadowmane2001 chapter 11 . 12/7/2018
OH Man.

Why do I now feel the SH*T is about to hit the fan?
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