Pls continue u have something great

I have some ideas like sticking go the storyline a little bit but not to much and make nastu seem realistic and maybe add the original character from rosario plus vampire( i dont know how to spell his name ) maybe its up to you

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Scene natsu at a school of monster he does count right because he is a demon and a dragon

Please update soon ok it's getting really good.

I really really lije tge pink on pink pairing. I rate it 7/10 so please update

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It was a nice short story but you can make a longer,more exciting chapter.

try to make natsus dragon slayer magic more dragon like he gets dragon hands or something

I think that you should do it like in RV but I think when kurumu "offered" Natsu , he could be dumb( yeah, I mean that he don't know anything about mate) . I like the annoying, childish and "pure " Natsu. For example:
" - Natsu, I... I love you!
- Yeah, I love you too.( smile )
- R... Really?
- Yeah, we're nakama, right? Nakama should love each orther.
- N... No, not like that ( sweat dropped ) "
Well it's kind of that. ( Sorry if I'm bothered you and my english is bad)

Really nice I think it has a lot of potential to become fic. And you should go back in your chapter(s) and maybe fix some of your spelling mistakes (if you do have some mistakes
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This story is looking amazing so far keep up the good work

add more chapters

You're did a good work with this chapter, I hope you get up your next chapter soon :)