Reviews for Independent Variables |
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MysticPuma chapter 2 . 3/23/2014 This story is beautiful and perfect and I feel all warm and fuzzy and omgomgomgomgogmogmgomgomg legend. |
Raxicoricofallapatorious chapter 2 . 11/30/2013 Aaaaaaaawwwwwww. That was sweet. Men are thick and horrible at communication as a whole, but I'm glad it ended well. I like your stories. :3 Raxi |
Raxicoricofallapatorious chapter 1 . 11/30/2013 Hello. Me again. :) Loving this one too. Beautifully sculpted and shaped and perfectly feasible. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Raxi |
EJ 12212012 chapter 2 . 8/8/2013 Haha flirting Sherlock is adorable. |
Onee-chan-05 chapter 2 . 4/9/2013 This was brilliantly, beautifully, fantastically in character and well written! I found your next one before this and I'm glad I read Sherlock's P.O.V. First. Off to Johns! |
Rose O' Sharon chapter 2 . 1/28/2013 *CLAPCLAPCLAPCLAP* That was the sound of enthusiastic VERY happy hand clapping together in approval of this wonderful amazing story! :D I actually found myself laughing out loud and clapping, and going, "YAY!" I absolutely adore this! It's in perfect character, the plot is both tense and hysterical, and I can TOTALLY see this on the TV show! Thank you SO much for writing this! :D |
Heart of a Slytherin chapter 2 . 12/4/2012 Ha! Sherlock gets a taste of his own medicine when he finally realizes his feelings for John, and vice versa. Love this! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2012 NEED MORE CHAPTERS ! |
shhhecret chapter 2 . 11/1/2012 this is greatly written! i hope you write more! |
CelesteTsukino chapter 2 . 10/15/2012 Very well done, and very much in-character. Bravo! One of the few fan-fictions I've read where I can almost imagine the whole story in my mind and am not drawn out of it by...well any number of things. Great job! |
EllaCrain chapter 2 . 10/11/2012 Yup, I loved this one. |
Arciere chapter 2 . 10/5/2012 While I laughed at Sherlock's 'delicate' way of testing his hypothesis, I feel like your ending sort of fell a little short of where it could have gone... I don't mean to be mean or anything, just saying that your set-up rather left me wanted something... a little more intimate I guess. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the story and your characters! Thanks for posting! -Arciere |
HamishWH chapter 2 . 10/4/2012 OMG THAT WAS GREAT LIKE WHAT OMG I LOVE YOU NOW OMG I CAN'T EVEN |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012 I loved this. Especially the part with the tea. You put me in giggle fits at 2 am. There was one part that confused me though. Sherlock's suddenly hyper-aware of John in... ways he doesn't understand yet, but when he sees the footage of John masturbating he's just like "whatevs |
coragyps chapter 2 . 10/3/2012 This was so cute, perfectly light and airy - glad that John, who is already a saint, didn't have to learn about all of Sherlock's manipulations. And they love each other! Well done, and thanks for sharing. |