i love this please update

Dude please continue this story please

Please continue the story, it's too good to be abandonned.

Please update it's such a good story.

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER IN THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE!

Dude, can you please continue writing down on Fairy Flame Dragon series I want to see what happens

technically natsu right now would already be a wizard saint based on the power you have shown he has hes already one of the top 10 strongest wizards hed be the first wizard saint using fairy fire dragon magic though considering he made a tower of magic so big it was seen clearly miles away

its parfume not perfume

It’s literally the best story I’ve read so far BUT it has the WORST grammar I’ve ever seen in my life I mean “I didn’t thought of it like that” doesn’t make sense I’ll even personally explain it to you because well you’ve gotta learn something in your life, when Erza said “I didn’t thought” she’s basically saying nothing because didn’t is present tense and thought Is past tense but when you wrote them both in the same statement it’s like pastpresent and that equals infinite explosion or in other words your breaking the rules of the internet and destroying one of the laws of grammar which is “never add present tense to past tense” although one could say that it equals the future however the past is going back in time and the present is just what’s going on right now so if you change even the slightest thing in the past it could cause a calamity in the present, same goes for the grammar anyway
Love the story BYE!

What did natsu do exactly

Hate Vanitas, he's a lame Virgil clone. Kill him off.

You are keeping to close to cannon in my opinion. Natsu being an a class mage and married with kid would have changed his behaviour immensely. It seems if you are retelling cannon while inserting your own ideas at some moments.

This is good

You made this way too canon. I really hope you don’t do that with the rest of the episodes. And Natsu has been training for years and doing s class missions with Erza so shouldn’t he have easily noticed that something was wrong with that salamander dude ? He did indeed got smarter from His training so why have him act soooo canon here it’s like everything in the previous chapters were for nothing. And when fighting he didn’t control his powers and destroyed everything... like cmon I reallyyyy hope you don’t stick to canon with minor changes would really ruin the story

Ok mavis can’t be that stupid to instantly trust a random ass dude that came out of nowhere not even fazed to see dead bodies and the situation happening and after getting chased by people she tells a stranger her sons name and what guild he will go to...