Reviews for Ash Master Journey
The Black Latios chapter 2 . 4/30/2018
update soon
Latias 213 chapter 2 . 8/27/2017
Nice
Amy Mia Yma chapter 2 . 6/12/2017
Braggy. Also, wierd! And 2 chapters only? Guess u coulnt handle the pressure of writing a longer story.
Amy Mia Yma chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
soooo unrealistic. Ash shouldnt blab to the whole world that he has a legendary on his team. he's supposed to be smart and nice, not snobbish and braggy.
Duelboy12 chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
Hi
Sasuke75249 chapter 2 . 11/16/2016
nice i can't wait to read more
Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2016
Cool
Escalation chapter 2 . 7/1/2016
A riolu learning aura sphere is a one in a million thing you fucking dipwad of an author. Just because one Riolu, who by the way, is the prince of All Riolu and Lucario, learned it doesn't mean all of them will. Also, didn't Ash get 10 pokeeggs?
Griffin87443 chapter 2 . 1/20/2016
dude its been years science you've updated this story so please update it or at least put it up for adoption
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Hey i don't know if u are still working on this if so can u update please thank u
alonewithaviolin chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
It has a lot of potential good luck.
Tenshi-Yoko chapter 2 . 9/3/2015
I really like this story, but I'm confused on why you switch from 10 eggs to 5 eggs? Still I would love to see what happens next!
Shadowwing2 chapter 2 . 7/21/2015
Nicely work can't wait for more chapters
Shaldeblade4 chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Coolers keep up the great work here
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
This is a master piece keep up the great job here
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