This is well written. I like how you describe Aya - clearly still a robot, but at the same time just as clearly sapient.

"Aya idly wondered if loving a man would be her complete destruction. Or if it could be her new beginning."
That was horrible thing to do. Wonderfully, wonderfully horrible.

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this is really perfect and beautiful and ajdfhdakjsfh
ahh just from the moment aya talks to him in that cell and kjadfhkjafh
i actually haven't watched more than that ahaha... spoiled myself and crying now.

They r such a cute couple and this was really well done

I like it. The insight on Aya's personality is very interesting. Very neutral emotion wise, but very interesting and sweet, in a way.

wow that was great defiantly write more!

loved this! excellent writing

This was so perfect and lovely and ughhh FEELS

Very intresting story! I like the ending it was good.

That was really well written, and I quite enjoyed it. Can't get enough Razaya! :)

The separate parts that made up the whole of this fic complemented one another nicely. I thought you did a really stellar job at capturing Aya's thought processes in response to Razer's actions. Beautiful job :)

Really good and great words for aya. Keep it up my friend.

I liked this a lot. It was really cute. I especially enjoyed your characterization and point of view of Aya, along with the computer commands and how she reacted to Razer's face. Cute. :)

Best best best. Better than most

What a lovely and completely refreshing/original take on my GL OTP! It's amazing to me that not only was this fic centred around Aya's POV- when the fandom generally prefers exploring Razer's-, but this was done in a way that is completely and uniquely her and my mind is still in awe as to how you managed to pull that off!

Absolutely beautiful and insightful, from beginning to end -which I particularly loved-. So thanks so much for writing this, and I truly hope to see more of your Razaya writing! :)