Reviews for Will of Fire |
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m1m1 chapter 7 . 7/12 I would like to read more please? |
PrettyKitty77 chapter 7 . 1/25 I hope you will finish the story at some point I'd like to see where it goes |
Kage Hakari chapter 7 . 12/30/2019 mwahahahaha XD that such a perfect ending to the chapter. can't wait for the next! |
Agrippa32 chapter 7 . 11/7/2019 The way you describe Kagome and her way of thinking is spot on! Kakashi too. I hope you will finish this story! So far everything is very spot on. I have literally no suggestions to make because everything is so good and not over the top at all, but also still very entertaining. Please keep up with the good work! |
mtnikolle chapter 7 . 9/29/2019 Lol! Now I'm doubly curious about who the well-composed ninja is! And at Saruka's groan, my first thought was that Kakashi had stuck her with the bill when he left :) This is super enjoyable, and I hope you continue writing it someday! |
mtnikolle chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 Hmmm, l just based on the mention of repeated chakra exhaustion, I assumed the shinobi was Kakashi, but you're right, it could be anyone. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/29/2019 This story really needs to continue. It's very well written, and I feel that Kagome's story is just at it's beginning in Konoha. Love it! |
shadewatcher chapter 7 . 4/7/2019 #cackles# XD Cute! |
madmiko chapter 7 . 3/26/2019 I have truly enjoyed this story so far. The last couple of chapters were very well-written, and I think the introspection was needed to advance the story. I like the way Kagome found her place in the village and immediately started improving things for everyone around her. I can definitely see Kakashi continuing to be curious about her and stealthily following her around. And finally, he has to spend a little time face-to-face with her again. Bringing Sakura along was interesting. I loved Kagome's comment to Sakura after she confessed she wanted to see under Kakashi's mask, and I am dying to know who the other shinobi who overheard her is. I see that this hasn't been updated for a few years, but I honestly hope you will return to it. Thanks for sharing your creativity and talent! |
madmiko chapter 3 . 3/26/2019 I like the way you went from Kakashi's point of view in the last chapter to Kagome's point of view in this one. I think you're doing a great job with her characterization, too. She definitely has never been one to spend too much time dwelling on different/confusing circumstances, and instead has always faced everything head-on and done what needs to be done. Nice job! |
madmiko chapter 2 . 3/26/2019 Your characterization of Kakashi really fits. |
madmiko chapter 1 . 3/26/2019 I am really enjoying your writing. It flows well and engulfed me in the story right from the start. I really love the fact that this could be any just about any of the characters. |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 7 . 5/4/2018 Wish there was more |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 6 . 5/4/2018 Like that she can sense him |
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 5 . 5/4/2018 Awsome how she pitched in to help |