Reviews for Will of Fire
m1m1 chapter 7 . 7/12
I would like to read more please?
PrettyKitty77 chapter 7 . 1/25
I hope you will finish the story at some point I'd like to see where it goes
Kage Hakari chapter 7 . 12/30/2019
mwahahahaha XD that such a perfect ending to the chapter. can't wait for the next!
Agrippa32 chapter 7 . 11/7/2019
The way you describe Kagome and her way of thinking is spot on! Kakashi too.
I hope you will finish this story! So far everything is very spot on. I have literally no suggestions to make because everything is so good and not over the top at all, but also still very entertaining.
Please keep up with the good work!
mtnikolle chapter 7 . 9/29/2019
Lol! Now I'm doubly curious about who the well-composed ninja is!

And at Saruka's groan, my first thought was that Kakashi had stuck her with the bill when he left :)

This is super enjoyable, and I hope you continue writing it someday!
mtnikolle chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
Hmmm, l just based on the mention of repeated chakra exhaustion, I assumed the shinobi was Kakashi, but you're right, it could be anyone.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/29/2019
This story really needs to continue. It's very well written, and I feel that Kagome's story is just at it's beginning in Konoha. Love it!
shadewatcher chapter 7 . 4/7/2019
#cackles# XD Cute!
madmiko chapter 7 . 3/26/2019
I have truly enjoyed this story so far. The last couple of chapters were very well-written, and I think the introspection was needed to advance the story. I like the way Kagome found her place in the village and immediately started improving things for everyone around her. I can definitely see Kakashi continuing to be curious about her and stealthily following her around. And finally, he has to spend a little time face-to-face with her again. Bringing Sakura along was interesting. I loved Kagome's comment to Sakura after she confessed she wanted to see under Kakashi's mask, and I am dying to know who the other shinobi who overheard her is. I see that this hasn't been updated for a few years, but I honestly hope you will return to it. Thanks for sharing your creativity and talent!
madmiko chapter 3 . 3/26/2019
I like the way you went from Kakashi's point of view in the last chapter to Kagome's point of view in this one. I think you're doing a great job with her characterization, too. She definitely has never been one to spend too much time dwelling on different/confusing circumstances, and instead has always faced everything head-on and done what needs to be done. Nice job!
madmiko chapter 2 . 3/26/2019
Your characterization of Kakashi really fits.
madmiko chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
I am really enjoying your writing. It flows well and engulfed me in the story right from the start. I really love the fact that this could be any just about any of the characters.
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 7 . 5/4/2018
Wish there was more
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 6 . 5/4/2018
Like that she can sense him
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 5 . 5/4/2018
Awsome how she pitched in to help
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