Great story so far. Please come back and update this soon.

Awesome story so far. Can't wait for more.

Liking how Hinata acts.

Really liked the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter.
Hoping for Naruto and Hinata since Hinata will take care of him once there together and after the life he's lived an overly obsessive lover may just be the best thing for him. He seems to be hesitating Hinata's advance's but is enjoying it having someone he can trust and generally cares for him is better then being alone.

Hinata killing people and been overly obsessive is interesting tho a bit OC I can see Hinata becoming like that after years of watching him. In canon she is a bit obsessive but that made her wait for him which ended up making them both happy.

As for why she never got close was because she was afraid of rejection she has a family that hates her and is considered an outcast to them as well most children picking on her because of her kind nature. Naruto being strong and always smiling saved her and she can't afford to loss that but she want's nothing more then to make him happy and be with him.

Both suffered from not being able to approach each other do to being afraid of the consequences. But they need each other so when that final barrier is crossed they can both be generally happy. Hinata is also willing to do what ever it takes to make him happy which you got to respect it's sad when people like that don't end up happy with the person they love.

Great story Naruto and Hinata Forever

Awesome job writing this story. hope there is more \\o.o/

Nice Job. Keep it up!

Gotta say, any mistakes aside (I honestly was too engrossed in the story to care), the story is great. I love NaruxHina, but I've always wondered about the whole obsessed Hinata thing. I hope you continue this story. It's pretty amazing how sad you make someone feel about a fictional character. Keep it up.

Fuck NaruHina, if Hinata realy cared and loved Naruto she will have been there from the beggining to save him from loneliness... being alone is horrible

God damnit i cried again :/
Lol good story by the way just putting it out there

For God sake, please, no I BEG you to change the Genre to Fantasy.
Hinata couldn't be ALWAYS be there for Naruto when he's mopping. She has other duty as member of tem 8 , a clan Heiress and a big sister.
In your delusion , you think she would abandon all of her duties for Naruto.
Damn, some people are OVERZEALOUS when it comes to Pairings. Logic be damned.

R.I.P
Common Sense

OK, that was odd. Figures Naruto would end up with the psycho stalker girl. But the whole thing with the blue haired girl is just strange...

First chapter is sensible, but the second one...
It's ridiculous that your liking to Hinata overcome common sense. Trash

I took another look at your stories when I was going through my PMs, this was and eye grabbing one. The emotions were complicated and this view of Naruto makes you question how much you know of Naruto's past. In the anime and manga, they talked about his childhood but never really went into extra detail about what he was feeling about generally everything. This was a really insightful piece.

damm this depressing story but couldnt stop reading hopefully you will someday finish it

Update plz!

The creation of the main character kind of reminds of romantic literature which mostly consists of suffering men looking for their aim of senseless lives. He’s noticeably analysing his emotional states as well, living in his “own world” full of sadness and mental brutality. He naturally seeks acknowledgement but his inside himself acts otherwise being sure of rejection up front. He apparently likes to stay in deserted places to clear his mind from the external reality which he doesn’t seem to belong to at all. This is a great idea of forming a brand new look of Naruto, who seems to be rather a witless person in the original storyline - I like him much more like this despite his weltschmerz, which actually creates a positively specific atmosphere.
Keep the story going, I’ve enjoyed it a lot.