I loved it please make a part two please

oooooh yes

Nice

More chapters pls this was awesome

good but could have had a better climax

Please make another part to this story because leaving off at the best part

This story is so cute and sexy and fun I would love to see a second chapter where crisie moves in with spike and they have a big fight with everyone about how she has changed, but no one thinks that

And maybe they could have a foal

It was a good read but there were a lot of spelling errors

You should do a follow up, I think spike making a decision to stay with chrysi and ether leaving or forcing the choice on his friends to let her stay would be a great story.

Are you bucking kidding me?! Why write "not a rape fic" when this is CLEARLY a rape fic?!

But it was a great rape fic. Just saying.

simply my favorite history of mlp

*sobs* that was beautiful ;-;
I wonder how it would be if she came back to be with him afterwards, ooh how entertaining it would be to read the reactions of the other ponies _

Aww now I don't hate the queen

I bet molestia waz watching froom afar tho

That was great, there really needs to be more stories like this

Can you try to make a sequel you know just as if they meet up again I want to know what would happen especially if twilight found out