Awesome. Really. I mean it

This is a gorgeous piece. Everyone stays very firmly in character in a topic where it's very easy to stray. The language was lovely, and I just loved everything about it. The highest of praise to you, bravo.

This was a beautiful little one shot. Really well written and so poetic. I rally enjoyed it. Thank you.

cute as puppy, sweet as a lollypop. thanks for the smiles :)

Love it! You protrayed the charactures exceedinly well! Great job!

Daughter of Hat-n-Cloggs

aww

Very sweet and well written. I enjoyed it and I hope you do a couple of other pieces similar to this.

This was so beautiful! If I have to be really nitpicky, then there were one or maybe two parts that perhaps would need to be looked over, but all in all it's really mindblowing! I simply love your writingstyle and the pace. It suits the characters and the story so much. An instant fave, that's for sure, though.

CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUTE!
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Ok, this is a good chapter hope you can write much more better chapter about Altair :)and Maria next time

Just beautiful...