This is really good, not least because James Roday's nose always reminded me a little bit of Ben Stiller's... :) I really liked it.

Great Chapter. I loved how Jules found the room where Shawn and Lassie were being held. Please continue.

So Shawn & Lassiter! Love the interaction between the two! Can't wait to read more!

Aww poor Lassie... I am seriously hoping they'll crawl through the tiny dark tunnel together. We all know how touchy Shawn gets And that makes Lassie mad, so hilarity usually ensues.

Oh, God! Have to keep saying "Poor Lassie" because to be concussed and having to listen to Shawn talk about zombies, of all things, I would rather be stuck with a dozen porcupines as well. At least the mop hitting his head was softer than the corner of the doorframe :) Great chapter, very funny! Look forward to the next one!

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Can I get a sequel? Please?

Geez, poor Lassie :( I hope you're going to continue with this because mainly I'd like to hear what he's going to say to Shawn because he will (which we know isn't going to be polite conversation) and want to see if they find that kid. Great story! :)

Love the "Princess Bride" reference! Poor Lassie! Hope they find the kid before he kills Shawn! Please update again soon!

Something tells me that Shawn will be hearing a lot more from Lassie in the next couple of hours, and most of it won't be nice. :) Thanks!

MOAR! Please. :) Loving this already.