Best chapter yet. More jack? His one sided crush struggle is funny.

Lindo , capitulo

Espero con ansías la continuación

Nicely done!

That was so sad. Thanks for ending it in a good note. Great Job!

Loved this too!

Love it!

Aww that was a sweet story and I feel they have to be together in the second one

I want more... it's as simple as that

Keep it up! I love it! :)

I loved this chapter & Im in tears rigt now. It was so hard to read it and not think about the 20 little angels that lost their lives last Friday.
Thank you for making it so beautiful and so heartbreaking too.

My heart goes to the victims of that awful tragedy, to the 20 little angels that now run happy and free in heaven.
Sad chapter. But I think I got the message behind those words. It was heartbreaking, but it was beautiful too.

Oh lord I was just crying and crying during this chapter. Even as I write this I'm crying and I can barely see what I'm typing. From the very start of this chapter I had a feeling something was not right. And my heart was in my throat. And the moment snow was bleeding in bed I swear I just knew! I knew she was going to have a miscarriage and when it was confirmed I was just a mess of snot and tears. And throughout the rest of the chapter I could not stop crying. Your words were beautiful. they imagery was fantastic. I can't even really explain my feelings right now.
I wish we wouldve heard a little more about john and maximus' birth or pregnancy but it was an emotional chapter so I understand. Will we be getting more about them soon? Thanks for updating love! :)

hahahaha

Lovely chapter! Might I ask where Diana came from. Surely Merida came from Brave. All I could think of is the late Princess Diana and Dianna Agron. :)