Somehow, I think they would have killed Seaspray instead of helping him if they could have known the truth.

And that really was a strange relationship between Swindle and his gestalt. Don't ask me why I think like that; it just strikes me that way.

That is a strange twist there, with Killshot. And good way to stop the bleeding, though I don't think it will stop the problems.

Sweet. Just read the whole thing, very interesting. Great fic, and I love that most of the characters are lesser-known, or ones that don't get much screen time. Adding in the other aliens was cool, usually TF fics are only on Cybertron or Earth. This is rather refreshing. You manage to juggle a lot of very different characters very well. I'm anxious to see how this turns out. Excellent work so far!

love the story:) hoping for more

I like how you write Skywarp and Swindle. Killshot is a cool OC.

So far I am very interessted in countinuing:) The dialog is really funny and you captured the characters very well.

I am on the edge of my SEAT! I can't wait for the rest! You're awesome! :D

I LOVE this story, it's amazing! I really enjoy reading it. It's funny, intense, emotionall-ish, and thrilling... All things I love reading in a story. You are awesome! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the rest.

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY! I love it! I cannot wait for zee rest :D you are amazing, and you should definently keep writing. I can't wait for what's gonna happen next :)

Seruosly i just cant stop reading this i want to go to bed but on the other hand i want to keep on reading this and killshot was right when he said Airachnid is a scary and disturbing individual.

i really love this story and where its gong cant wait for S2

LOVE IT

so you want criticism that is constructive well i will give you some ups and some downs( might not be alot of downs )
ups:
i love that swindle has his greedy personalty because it wouldnt be swindle without his greed.

there are no downs really i just love were this story is going continue)

Titty sprinkles.

And this is where I have to start reading again!
Though it was a bit tedious at some parts, like the past three chapters, I enjoyed it.
You did an excellent job setting up the main setting and the story line! Can't wait to read season one!