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valash122 chapter 4 . 8h
sooo basically all this story is a naruto who understands his darkness and accepts it like he did in canon, he basically has the same dream as in canon, still acts like an idiot at points, forgiving to those who basically abandoned him or treated him wrongly. Whelp hate to say it this story is dead to me i was hoping for a naruto that was different like a true ninja who didn't take shit from anyone, didnt forgive anyone and had different dream, but low and behold nothing changed same bs as canon... i just got to ask you and all these other authors one question; why do you guys write a naruto story by using the same elements as the actual story? only things that change is meeting kurama early and becoming friends with him, naruto accepting his dark side, and meeting his parents...oh and basically keep him the same as a loud obnoxious moron who still wants to be hokage.. if the readers think this story is different then they have yet to fully read the manga or watch the anime fully that the same elements happen with naruto meeting his dad first than his mother. not hating on you man or attacking you but have to say you didnt do much for your story with just having events happening early
JessicaFridge chapter 11 . 9/11
This story was great while it lasted!
story absorber chapter 11 . 8/13
hm DUDE ITS BEEN 7 FUCKING YEARS UPDATE ALREADY
Raphael Blier chapter 11 . 8/12
This has to be the longest week in history...
Guest chapter 4 . 8/10
you make naruto meet dark self but his personality nothing different and not create his own path (hokage and greatest ninja are from his mother and father)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/10
why his character become plain like that?,, his grandson still live but he cannot protect hokage son? he want better chillhood but he tell everyone about his status
Yuzuki476 chapter 11 . 8/8
Please update this amazing story soon.
Yuzuki476 chapter 10 . 8/8
Hahaha good job naruto.
Yuzuki476 chapter 9 . 8/7
Great chapter.
Yuzuki476 chapter 8 . 8/7
I love this story.
Yuzuki476 chapter 7 . 8/7
Am glad that Tobirama sense sharigans on Traitor bastard danzo and he is dead. Looks like naruto and sasuke are getting along well and third hokage is going to tell sasuke the truth about itachi and uchiha clan.
Yuzuki476 chapter 6 . 8/7
... HAHAHA THAT ROTTEN SNAKE GOT HIS ASS KICKED BY JIRAIYA AND 1ST HOKAGE AND 2 HOKAGE AND 3 HOKAGE MAN THIS IS FUNNY.
Yuzuki476 chapter 5 . 8/7
Hope that you are doing okay.
Yuzuki476 chapter 4 . 8/7
Hahaha yes! Naruto got three elements water and wind and lightning I wonder if naruto could use Ice Style and storm style? And am glad that kakashi has admitted that he was wrong and said sorry to naruto and good job naruto for kicking jiraiya in the balls.
Yuzuki476 chapter 3 . 8/7
Am so happy and glad for naruto to meet and make peace with his dark self and meeting his parents who loves him very deeply and become friends with kurama ( kyubi). Will naruto awakend a bloodline?.
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