I went outta my way to look for something like this and you killed it, boss. I cried twice. Read the whole thing in about 5 hours. Was wonderful.

Great story ! This is one of the best I have read in a long time. I don't know why more have not taken the ride. I am going to read "Privileged" next hope it is as good. I know I came late to reading this so I hope you get this review and know that someone is still reading your work. Keep writing.

I really loved this! Her anger towards Edward was making me nervous for awhile but it was perfect!

Oh what a magnificent fic you've written. I wish you would write more vampire fics. good new ones are few and far between xx

This wasn't always easy to read, but it always kept my interest. I have never read a fic quite like this one. Your characters were flawed, but multilayered. It made for more intriguing reading. Thank you for sharing your story.

Wonderful story. Thanks for the hours of good reading.

Tanya st al couldn't give Edward a little more time before they encroached upon their blissful bubble? I think that's pretty rotten of them knowing how long Edward has been wanting time with Bella. How can they smooth things out if they aren't given the time and space in which to do it? They can get all the low Dow nitty, gritty later. I mean, how selfish. They love making was well written and I really liked it. On a side note, it seems like you aren't active on this site any more so my reviews have slowed down. I will definitely be back to review at the end.

I feel for Ryan, but honestly, I thought the same thing when Edward told Bella that Ryan was in love with her...He doesn't even know her. Not really. Vagina Monologues, lol.

Something I thought of from the last chapter is that no matter how hurt and angry Bella is about Edward leaving her, she's essentially doing the very sane thing to Ryan. She's decided that him loving her, her loving him puts him in danger. Her life is too dangerous, and so she makes the decision (for him) that he's better off without her. She believes she's doing the right thing by removing herself from his life. Sacrificing her (and his) wants, and chance at happiness together, for his own good-to give him the chance to live a long, happy, normal life. A life without having to run, having to always look over his shoulder for danger and a chance for children, etc. All very familiar reasoning. Same as Edward's rationale. I bet Ryan hates it as much as she did/does.
Current chapter: Welp, there you go, the Ryan situation sorted. I mean it sucks that he jumped to a new girl so quickly, but I guess this was Randy licking his wounds. Bella had rejected him and in effect quit and left him behind. Still, had to sting for Bella to have that smack her in the face. But yay, now she has the desire to clean her self up. She needed to want it for herself. She is a quick thinker, that one. I got the biggest kick out of Bella telling Dave that Edward was only seventeen. Excellent! Then to find him sitting stewing in the car with his arms crossed, is so funny.

Can't believe he drugged her. And if he was going to go that route, my half-step? Go full-on kidnapper and take her phone and her drug stash. He's ok injection g her, but didn't want to violate her privacy by going through her bag? Bella is NOT here for their bull crap. She is not mincing words, she's mad as hell. She's so angry she won't even spare a word of acknowledgement to Carlisle and Esme. I think they deserve every bit of her wrath. I did expect them to stop her from leaving though. The heat sensitive bit was clever.

Wow, what an intense chapter. I'm not sure what I expected her to do. I mean, I didn't think she'd bolt, but I half way expected an awkward, stunned freeze up, or that she'd dig her heels in and perform, but that Edward would stop her and then she'd storm off. Or as soon as she saw him, she'd angrily tell him off and then run. I most definitely was surprised, thoroughly. By both Bella and Edward. Randy seems like a genuinely nice guy and its clear he really cared for Bella. Bella is tormented by the events from her past and the ever-looming threat. I guess it's not like she could get therapy or confide in someone. When she lost Jake, there was no one she could talk to about these things, of the supernatural world, that plague her thoughts and haunt her. Her drug use is so disturbing. I wonder who that was that pricked her.

Mike obviously blabbed just as soon as he could. I figured he would. He was gleeful to find her working the pole for single and such. He wasn't concerned, or sad, he was smug and spiteful. I knew he'd tell.

Ok, I'm going in. I've been bypassing this fic for while. Drugs, it's the drugs that has my leery. It's a heavy, emotional topic.

This story has been on my TBR list for so long. Amazing story, plot, characters. A new favorite.

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are living together & I'm happy that Bella & Edward had a Beautiful Wedding