It's a very interesting, funny and fascinating story. It's takes place in the period after volume 16, when so they had waived to arrive Yoitsu, right?

Well not bad for a first chapter, you've got their personalities just right.

Please finish the story it could be a good one

maybe you're just doing this for your own enjoyment, but there's nothing here

it's just hilarious and zany dialogue

needs some writing

The beginning is really good, and now I'm all curious on where this initial set will bring the two characters I laughed so much when Holo began to trick Lawrence in her own special way that everyone knows :D

Well, keep up the good work ;)