I totally loved the beginning, there was so much action & it was so confusing & angsty! And then it got all cute with little-Sasuke & little-Sakura :S But my favorite part is (strangely) where Itachi suddenly snapped at his clanmates & Sakura stopped him from doing something life-changing… The chapters later were less entertaining, since it was like reading the manga again xD But, now it’s getting more interesting again! I hope Sakura’s going to get stronger as well! Between for me, it seems like she has an incredible hearing! Like how she heard the Itachi-incident while coming back from shopping with Mikoto! Surely if she heard it, Mikoto should have heard it as well! But it didn’t seem like it. And I’m really curious about her relationship to Akatsuki! Or her clan for that matter!
Thanks for these incredibly exciting chapters so far! I'll wait patiently for the next one!
Bye~ Ame

I would have loved to see sasuke dress up as a girl for this chapter

This has to be one of my favorite alternative beginning fanfic. I love the bond between sasuke and sakura before and after the massacre. I love the development and the subtle change in personality. I have read many fics like these but none of them compares to yours. This was an amazing journey, even though incomplete? I still end up re reading this 10 times!

YOU GOTTA FINISH IT

please update soon! PLEASE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE! thank you..

Aww this is so sweet but it would have been better if the timeline did not change so frequently. It got to a point where i din't know what i was reading until i realised it was flashback to the past again.

This is beyond sweet I love that Sasuke has someone to lean on and I really hope he doesn't leave Sakura behind if he does defect from the village. I just love the bond they share, starting off as familial love and then slowly progressing. I'll look forward to any updates you have for this! Please don't drop it!

I totally luv ur story ! Its sooo sweet with sasuke and sakura n naruto too ! Lol , but ... Since I know wat really happens ... I'm hoping that Itachi doesn't die :( cuz I lyk him . Anywayy I really luv ur story

SAKURA WAS BORN TO MEET YOU

SAKURA DIED FOR YOUR SINS

ALL HAIL THE THIRTEENTH ANGEL, HARUNO SAKURA

I'm thoroughly enjoying this so far. I love how it's kinda canon, but not reallly. It's easily one of my favorite ongoing Naruto stories. Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is cute, I'm only starting to read the story... i can only imagine when they're older haha :)

Don't stop updating , ok? This is a really great fit.

I love the story! Please continue writing! :)

Update please! I really like it

Loved it,desperately waiting for a new update!