Fuck Luffy and his assumptions

You can give this to someone to finish this fic

A very entertaining story.

HE KILLED HIS NAKAMA
OOOH SHIT
OOH SHIT
CROCODILE IS GONNA BE IN A WORLD OF HURT
OOF
I WONDER WHEN THIS WORLDS PEOPLE ARE GONNA REALIZE THEY REQUITED THE PIRATE KING TO HELP THE MARINES
I WANT THE LUFFY'S TO MEET
THIS IS GONNA BE INTERESTING

Please continue this story

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you!

awwww, oh well at least you told us, too many people don't even do that, and thanks for putting up the unfinished chapters

I hope that one day you might update again, and once again thanks for the great story thus far

I know that you declared the story discontinued and that you dont feel like writing it anymore. Maybe writing a review for a discontinued story doesnt make sense but I think every reviewer who knows this and still leaves some words is secretly hoping that you will publish another chapter some day, and say: "Hey, I found my muse again". Unlikely, huh.

Anyways, your story is cool. Really.
Your writing is pleasant to read and the characters are cool, especially the OCs.
What really got me though is the plot, the potential it has. I mean Luffy now has a world full of new adventures, and I can imagine him using this chance, toppling the powers of the world and throwing everything into chaos. On the other hand, there are powers working against him. Marine Luffy, the world government and more-or-less Vegapunk. Luffy will try to find a way home afterall. But before that he might be able to awaken long forgotten dreams and crush other peoples dream that seek to destroy.
I cant stop thinking of what he could do, and what others would do. If the Strawhead in the other world get impatient, they might just visit; Marine Luffy might grow more into his potential, understand his alternative self more and grows over his fears because he could be more (not a pirate but you know, a better Marine, a happier person- there are so many ways to live a life)- I mean who knows?
Now that I wrote that down, I can stop thinking about this xD

You left a great story here. Im happy that you kept it here and wrote almost 60k words. Thats amazing.

I hope that your life will get less stressful, and that you can use your creativity for good stuffy xD
Have a good day!

(The moment you think about summiting your review as guest review...)

Great fanfiction! I don't even care if it's not going to be finished the bit that's here is AMAZING and we'll worth the read. Thank you for the bit that is on here and I hope that things get better for you it sounds like you were(and hopefully not still) going through a lot in you're life. I totally accept you're reasons for dropping this fic, your health is way more important then pleasing some strangers online so I wish you the best. Also if it's any consolation Bio is kicking my butt as well(I'm fairly certain bio and maybe math are just designed to crush souls) again thanks for this wonderful fanfic everything from the characters personalities, writing, and plot were great!

Oh it seems it's getting shelved that sucks

marine luffy is wound so tight he's bound to snap! luffy knocked out big mom very cool! I hope you continue this!

I had fun reading your story! Thanks so much for writing it.

Despite that this will remain unfinished, I love it and will continue to read it again and again. The concept is incredible and the writing quite immersive. I support you're decision to leave this story unfinished, writing a narrative is immensely difficult. Regardless I want to thank you for creating this wonderland story. It's truly a work of art.

God, I can't believe how much I love this fan fiction. If you ever decide to continue this story, I will praise you infill you get so sick of me telling you how awesome you are you report me.

I wish you would have kept going