Reviews for The Worth of the World
Callum Runchman chapter 23 . 7/18
This was nice but despite all that happened between percy and annabeth I find it hard to believe that she'd get with a random mortal and end up marrying them. Especially after she found out percy was innocent, the guilt (even though she'd hate to admit it) would eat her up to the point where she wouldn't be able to focus properly on anything. I mean their bond was too strong to be broken so simply in the first place and then, even after the false accusations she still deep down would have had some feelings for him like she did with Luke. I mean he was a clear traitor for like 4 years before she finally mostly accepted it. Her and percy wouldn't have been able to move on so easily and definitely would have likely ended back together after the truth was revealed
Spidersauce chapter 23 . 4/28
Well that was pretty good. Ending was a bit rushed but that happens sometimes.
Spidersauce chapter 16 . 4/28
Percy doesn't shrink before literal Gods, Titans, Giants, or Primordials. Stop making him scared of Fury, that's so massively out of character it isn't even funny.
Spidersauce chapter 11 . 4/28
Really, Percy is a top agent? Who sits with his back to the entrance of the cafe?
Spidersauce chapter 10 . 4/28
"It was his entire fault. Everything was his fault."
God complex much, Percy?
Spidersauce chapter 8 . 4/28
So this whole chapter is honestly pretty bad. I've liked most of your writing, but people getting the drop on Natasha and Clint? On Percy and Sif multiple times?
If a simple bottle of salt water is all it takes to heal Percy THAT quickly, he'd carry one with him at all times. No reason not to. It'd be part of his kit: sword, gun, and bottle. Barton/Romanoff/Nico would likely carry one as well when around Percy.
Several other things as well, this chapter reads like you had a plot in mind to follow, and didn't even consider how the characters you were writing would actually respond. Nico's response was closebut there's no way he wouldn't have taken the few seconds to evac Percy first.
Spidersauce chapter 6 . 4/28
I actually am more interested in this going a Sif/Percy direction instead haha. Her little PoV sharing her thoughts of 'Perseus' intrigued me.
Ocean.breezzq chapter 23 . 4/2
I loved it! please do a sequel!
Ocean.breezzq chapter 18 . 4/2
It's Cerberus, and it's quintet.
Ocean.breezzq chapter 5 . 4/2
less singlets
Ocean.breezzq chapter 1 . 4/2
teen wolf and HoO
Falconress chapter 11 . 12/18/2019
Ooh, interesting. I can't find a ship name, because both of the last three letters in their name are rcy.
Falconress chapter 6 . 12/16/2019
I'm pretty sure that his middle name is Achilles.
Falconress chapter 3 . 12/16/2019
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Megatronus666 chapter 2 . 8/3/2019
(Luke and Ben sit down at the cantina. Luke is accosted by a hostile alien named Ponda Baba, accompanied by Dr. Cornelius Evazan.)
Dr. Evazan: He doesn't like you.
Luke Skywalker: Sorry.
Dr. Evazan: I don't like you either! You just watch yourself! We're wanted men. I have the death sentence on twelve systems.
Luke Skywalker: I'll be careful.
Dr. Evazan: You'll be dead!
Ben Kenobi: (Stepping in) This little one's not worth the effort. Now let me get you something.
(Dr. Evazan attacks Luke; Ben pulls out his lightsaber and cuts off the arm of Ponda Baba.)
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