Great chapter. Not predictable, exciting and realistic.

I loved this story! a great party.

Wow! Jane and friends had an interesting day!

I am enjoying this story again. Edward is very hot and cold.

Very well written and interesting story!

ok, I this chapter seems weird, too bad because the beginning of the story is great. But I'll continue to read it until the end

Thank you so much for sharing your creativity!

thank god that shits over with. Sue using Charlie...her new love interest to get over the old one was getting seriously fucking annoying...I want to smack the fuck out of sue...hate that bitch

I don't get it...after he said it wouldn't happen again..why in the fuck would bella agree to another date? and she'll always forgive him? even though he has backtracked their relationship, makes all the calls, hold all the power...well bella lets him have all the power...shes soooo pathetic!

so your main plot line is done...so now you've backtracked Edwards relationship with bella so you still have a story to tell?stupid

are you trying to say that james walked off with Tanya and Tanya had sex with james? james has a MATE, why would he want anything to do with a nasty old whore like Tanya? Does MATE not mean much in your story?

I still don't get why their all listening to her. Shes like your with so and so and bella your with me...and they just fall in line? Why? I don't understand.

this whole thing feels pointless. There are already waaaay more people then needed to take out vickis punk ass so I don't get why their all following her and getting more people ...it just seems so pointless. and why in the fuck is she builing a "army" that isn't loyal to her? how does that help? Now their going to talk to ben...why follow her ALL that way? why not just rip her head off?
and that whole Charlie thing...how about bella just says..listen you ass I'm right your wrong, your either with me or against me...he'd be like you know I'm on your side bells...its you and me...or solved

bella just continues to be the stupid little fucktard you wrote her to be...why wouldn't she explain everything rght there at the cullens? why play right into vickis hands...bella knew Charlie doesn't know that vicki and them are liars...yet she goes with him to them...she leaves the cullens in a huge hurry cause apparently they had a important appointment to get to...LOL
your sacrificing Bella for the sake of your story...which makes no god damn sense because shes YOUR MAIN CHARACTER
fucktard

what the hell was that? Bella is just waiting around with bated breath...waiting for Edward to make a move...ready and willing...like a pathetic little whore. I don't get why bella gave him all the power. why does the relationship only move forward on his say so? I don't get it! I freaking hate your bella, shes soooooo weak!