I have a fantastic idea!

What if

you made a sequel?

Well...that sure escalated quickly

I love fics that are filled with what they promise with a bit of fluff to top it off. I loved it

i love the length of this story -w- but i was rooting for him to become Phantom's queen and leave with him, tho

"You're just full of yourself, aren't you?"
Took me like three seconds, but then I got it
HOLY SHIT
I'M DYING XD XD XD

Okay, hold up
first you go,Green eyes fell upon his angsty prince."
Then one paragraph later you go, "... he was unable to glare directly at Phantom's ruby red eyes,..."
Make up your mind
Which is it?

I am dying. My friends turned off the light probablly an hour ago and I am half asleep but I literally could not put this down. It was so good. You guys are amazing. It is written so well and the characters are so perfectly executed. I can actually see Danny acting like that. And as for Phantom, it makes sense for him to be the way he is in your story. I know I'd be going with the guy with the money though. You guys did an excellent job. And I would recommend this to anyone who likes Pitch Pearl. Thank you so much for writing and posting this amazing piece!

I had the feels! I cried so hard...only at certain parts. It was sooo good though! You my friend are an excellent writter!

the fic is well written the endling is kinda meh for me but im gonna fav this if only cause of how well written its is

I think you should write an epilogue

That-was-so...Beautiful!The sex and the love wow,u really out did yourself.I ️ed it!

Dont get me wrong i like it but its way to deataled you do know younger kids come on here right

I love the ending, it's really cute. I would be kinda upset if you didn't have a charming or sweet or cutesy ending.

Wow, you have made me totally revise my opinion of Pitch Pearl. I actually disliked it (though I don't know why because Haunted Past is my second favorite pairing) but now I love it more than Pompous Pep which was number 3. However, Pitch Pearl still can't beat Iambic Prose or Haunted Past. But since I've read all of those, I'm going to read some Pitch Pearl now.

OH MY GOSH!
When Phantom's eyes were green I was so happy that I felt like crying! :D (I actually cried a tiny bit...)
The next bit made me a bit sad...
But the ending turned out well, and made me laugh! XD
Man... that was a VERY long, lemony, fanfic!
Keep up the good work!