Loved the story!

Only read this story now. Yep, Loki raised on Jotunheim might not be such a good thing. We never really know what the Jotnar are like overall. Maybe some writers are correct and they have a much worse rep than deserved. However, I'm pretty sure Laufey himself was pretty brutal and children raised by him would likely be so as well. As twisted around as Loki became when he discovered his heritage and shattered, you still feel (hope) he might have a solid core to him. This Loki is warped through and through and doesn't have a conscience. If you want a story of evil Loki, this one has him unleashed from any inhibitions and morals. He is one scary and ruthless sucker.

Wow! A very different and interesting take on Norse-cum-MCU... great work!

Oh Jesus. #lokiconquersthemultiverse

Woah, I was not expecting that. That was very good, even if quite dark and a little scary on Loki's part. I really liked the idea for this. You wrote Loki very well, but I'm not sure if Loki would want to take over everything...but alas, we'll never know. Great writing!

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Pretty plausible to me. Again, you hit all the right notes.

Dark but compelling. Worthy of a prize

Intense! Really original and creative. :)

Oooo so deliciously dark. I must confess Loki is and always will be my
most favourite character. He is so delightfully twisted and no matter how many appalling things he does I can't help but admire his wickedness. Your writing truly does his justice.

I can imagine these will all play out if Loki's fate was such. He is still the same Loki, but he became more calculating, patient, and cold, due to the fact that he was pushed into such a childhood that the only kindness he tasted was not being killed. The pace of the events is also good, details are subtle but enough to give the reader the main ideas. Although I try to imagine how you would write this story in a novel way like what you do in Aphelion. This form works very well, but I'm just curious.

Empty and cold and terrible... There's no heart here. Is that what you where going for? Heartless? Because you've succeeded and I'm not sure what to think.

That, as usual, was amazing. You have a knack for writing AU stories and make them so real that they're almost cannon. (:

I absolutely adore this. Beautifully rendered, fantastically written, hauntingly gorgeous. Fantastic, fantastic job.

Wow this was quite the distopia. Loki's so cool and calculating, it's frightening. Thanks for the gift. Really, I think you should have 3 times the reviews you have now. Your writing is amazing!

This story is... wow. Just... WOW. So good, so eerie, so creative, so... EVERYTHING. Great job, dear! I can't wait for more of Aphelion, either! XD