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Really liked this one.

really hot

That was absolutely sexy. And steamy. And sexy.
I could see the improvement youve made in your writing since I had read Behind the mask earlier so kudos! Youve really grown and I love your writing style!

. . . . hot, this was hot

I found your Fanfiction profile, looking for BuJeet (I can't help it, i love them!)
and love your "Whether Fiery and Intense or Tender and Sweet", and i become very sad for no found any new ff of you
Now, en DA, i found 2 new AU! This and Thunderous Beats and Stifled Cries! and i tourn here, to your profile and bam! You're still here publishing your work and i miss all of this ;A;

I don't know why, but this 2 aren't in the BuJeet tag here, so i think that is the reason for the non reviewers...and is a shame, because you writte about the sooooo well

(Sorry, long review and whit so many mistakes because i don't speak english, but a want to share it whit you -.-)