"really not from around here . . ."
I would think that the blonde hair would b a dead giveaway . . . _

How is Ed okay to being called tiny and short stuff?!

Truly exceptional, I enjoyed this whole thing from start to finish, Kudos to you.

This was a wonderful story.

This is getting even better

This sounds really good

This is a magnificent story.

It was good to see Zuko again, and Hope, I wish they show up in book 3 or 4 for LOK.

I don't think the walls of Ba Sing Se can be considered "impregnable" anymore, given the wall WAS broken during the 100 Year War by a giant drill, and the Fire Nation DID take it over for a time. "Near-impregnable" would be the more appropriate term, but that's just me.

If I could appear before people after dying, I would haunt the SHIT out of that white noise.

I didn't make any comments for this story until now because I just couldn't stop reading it. It was amazing -
I loved it, there were parts that made me sad and parts where I giggled a lot XD
EX. when Tenzin freaked out thinking Lin was building an army lolz
Thank you for this

Nice finish! I loved the story. I'm looking forward to the next season of Legend of Korra, and the sequel to this story as well.

well i was expecting a bit more of an argument, but i still liked the end, and am looking forward to the sequel

wow Won Shi Tong was being a lot more reasonable this time and hopefully things will continue for the better so i am looking forward to the next chapter

i would definitely be interested i n reading a sequel, and i didn't know anything about book 2 till u mentioned it here cause i haven't seen any advertisements or anything about it, and i am looking forward to reading about what happens next