Reviews for How to Foil an Outcast's Plan |
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Guest chapter 6 . 4/25 Wow f. Tbh fantastic ending |
Eris chapter 6 . 3/10/2019 Awesome story. Very exciting and fascinating. But please finish it. |
Cyberbook chapter 6 . 9/27/2018 Two sad things that made me sad when reading this chapter,, and i don't wich one more: the almost agonizingly insane state of Hiccup after the torture... or the fact that the damn autor had to leave us in that damn cliffhanger and never come back! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22/2018 I can’t believe that’s wheee you left it |
Just a visitor chapter 6 . 3/7/2017 I KEEP RE-READING IT IT'S SO GOOD ASDFGHJKL |
Just a visitor chapter 6 . 3/6/2017 OHMYGODTHISSTORYMADEMECRYPLEASEWRITEMOREILOVEITSOMUCHASDFGHJKL |
Everlight18 chapter 6 . 12/21/2016 "Oh, Hiccup," said Gobber sadly, but the boy ignored it, patiently weaving together flower stems with broken fingers, desperately trying to fix what was broken, while all the others wondered how in the world they would do the same. My heart just shattered all over the floor... Oh, this story is so bittersweet and angsty and I actually thought that he'd be okay as long as they got him out of there. That last line just plain killed me though... How he's so broken and trying to fix the world that he never broke in the first place. And the flowers... It just makes me want to cry. Your descriptions brought the story to life and I hope that you will continue it. It's isn't complete, is it? Because I'm hoping that Hiccup will be able to recover somewhat at the very least, even if he never fully gets better. Thank you for writing this! It's hard to find good stories that keep everyone in character and don't deviate into something sexual, especially in a fic that has torture. |
Dratias chapter 6 . 12/12/2015 Wow. He's really lost his marbles, hasn't he? |
Star Awesome chapter 6 . 12/5/2015 crying and I will never stop |
Midoriko-sama chapter 6 . 11/3/2015 Such a pity this is a dead fic. Would it be horrible rude of me to ask how it would have ended? I've always been so curious about whether Hiccup had really gone batty or was faking it. |
Noname chapter 6 . 10/30/2015 Well, don't leave us hanging! |
3elizabeth chapter 6 . 7/2/2015 I normally don't do this, but I have to plead for the next chapter! I really like this story and the characters especially Hiccup's plot within himself. It is a disservice to your characters and readers to simply abandon it at that point of Hiccup's insanity. I need to know if he comes out into his old reliable self, though if completely recovered is impossible then at least partially better- you know where he is almost normal but nothing is the same since. So please please please update this story! Thank you! |
dashandcrash chapter 2 . 4/6/2015 Wow. That last part is intense! In a good way I mean. I am so eager to see what lies ahead in the next chapter! You know you should become a professional writer or ghostwriter! Your very good. |
Kitsu Maxwell chapter 6 . 3/4/2015 Oh gods... Just... Oh gods... I... Please... Please, ma'am... May I have some more?... |
dragoncreators chapter 6 . 12/31/2014 TT_TT |