Hello my name is day-zsweetie and hun I have to tell you this story is good I know I'm late for a review but I thought you should know this . How many times have you read a story that wasn't finished and take note you love the story . And the person says on free time . Or some other lame ass excuse . But after a year or so they the writer has a bitch come and tell them the truth and it goes like this. If you feel as if you can write a story and then totally not updated after people ask you to . Maybe you lost interest or whatever but the people readers reviewers fans people who follow or fav the author or story or both think that is shit because they always hear excuses like that . Well I'll tell you no , no you can not not updated . Because people ,the bitch, will not give up. Now that I said this you probably won't even read this but who gives a fuck as long as I say it and get it off my chest

So for all of us plz

Update

Day-zsweetie OUT !

This is really good. The characters are great etc. Wish it continued.

You never got freetime? I want an update for this. :( It's sooooo good. Please don't abandon this awesome story!

I have a lot of suspicions on who the murderer could be...

Mario - Bowser's death makes me suspect him and he just suspicious a lot.

Peach - I have a small suspicion on Peach, because she lied in chapter 4 when she said she was meeting up with Mario even though he was meeting up with Vivian and she never met up with him. So, she could've lied to mask up murdering Toadsworth, but she could've had a date with Bowser or something?

Vivian - She's trying to play the role of the hero and that's suspicious and a good idea for a secret murderer, she could be trying to lead suspicion elsewhere.

Yoshi - HE acts suspicious maybe him and Vivian are partners in crime.

John - My last suspect, he's keeping a secret... perhaps that he's a murderer?

People I don't suspect -
Daisy - She was caught in that rope trap when Bowser was murdered so it couldn't be her,,,
Rosalina and Wario - They were drunk when Toadsworth was killed.
Dixie, Diddy, Donkey, Flurrie, Toadia, Tiny Kong, Toadiko - I'm doubtful on them because Toad wasn't murdered on the island... where they live.

Everyone else could be the murderer but they haven't been remotely suspicious to me.

So anyways, awesome chapter! I can't wait to for you to updateso I can do more to uncover who the murderer is!

Love the chap! :)

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Wow! I didn't expect Bowser to die so soon. Could Toadia actually be insane and SHE could actually be the murderer but she tries to convince herself that she's not? I've seen that happen before in a couple of movies, and it's such an awesome plot twist.

UPDAAATTEEEE! I'm obsessed with this story!

This chapter was very interesting the end of it was amazing. I kinda wish I was with Vivian and Yoshi so I could play detective with them. xD

Most suspicious: Mario (seems vague...) Vivian, and Peach.
Least Suspicious: Toadette, Dixie, and Toadia. I t'm pretty sure they were partying when Toadsworth was murdered so it couldn't have been them.

That was a very interesting twist at the end there. Kinda gave me chills too! For the most suspicious, I guess maybe Mario? That "naive" comment kinda caught my attention. Least suspicious are Rosalina and Wario since they were so drunk and a death occurred last night, so there's no way either of them could've made a kill. (Unless I remember it wrong).

I liked this story... But now, because of the BowserxPeach... I'm never reading it again. :

Is this story based off of Harper's Island, the mini TV series? I love that show and I love the fact that someone here did a story similar to it because it's a very clever and interesting mystery drama that instantly pulls you in. I like it.

Aw not the lil boy! Toadia its ur fault ;-;

Omg! Vivian likes mario?! Aww :) nd peach had a abortion nd cheated on mario?! I got alot of things to call her now lol jk! N this old lady sounds mysterious...

Another great chapter! Dixie is a bit mean nd lol rosalina drunk? Funny! XD Aww poor Bowser :(