awe :)

This was a really cool idea. I think you captured the characters personality really well. I love your writing style and the way you described the inner monologues Merlin and Arthur.

It was really good. I hope you will write a sequel

Excellent idea I must say. :)

Lovely ending. Great job!

He remembers! The priestess's death has destroyed her curse (hopefully). Yay!

That's right. He doesn't know what he's missing! Must be so heart wrenching. :( Poor Merlin

Dun dun dun! I like this unicorn :3 Merlin has been discovered!

So sad that the people closest to Merlin don't remember him. Go Arthur! Find him and remember! Keep up the great work!

He's remembering! You can't stop destiny random priestess!

Now it begins. And he has left a track. Glad that Arthur's safe. Great job!

Agravaine! Grrr I hate him : I hope he gets what he deserves. Poor Merlin is withering away. He needs a reason for his life - for his magic. It's still Arthur, but he just hasn't realised it yet. Great job!

That's so sad. Poor Merlin. What a horrible price to have to pay

I loved your story and is a refreshing change of plot. Thank you for sharing

I loved every single word of this story! You have an amazing writing style that I have become addicted to. It is very easy to read yet shows great amounts of skill and consideration. I applaude you, young squire, for this outstanding literary feat! Great storyline, great style, great pace, great writing all over. Thank you for posting this for us and congratulations on such a brilliant story! Can't wait to read more of your work!