Reviews for Fifty Shades: Broken Hearted
hummergirlnv chapter 21 . 7/19
I am glad you allowed AS to have a lover, I hope CG peaked in the window an witness this, so now he can under stand how his wife felt.
Ms MMS chapter 7 . 6/8
It’s always so distressing to have a story where Christian cheats. Yours is especially good since you are showing other consequences of his cheating. Not just hurting his wife emotionally but physically and almost costing them their baby.

Very moving story so far.
janet garrett chapter 50 . 5/29
I am re-reading this and I find that over the years your opinions change, well here is my take on this . First Ana is trying too hard which tells me she has doubts, Allyson is a piece of work and wrong for what she is trying to do to Ana and Christian by faking his involvement in her pregnancy.
Why on this earth does Ana think that after all this time Christian months of seeing this women all of a sudden she is the bad guy, and he is not interested or responsible for any of this, eight months ago he was doing her and loving it and guess what old habits die hard Ana will learn this lesson the hard way, I would bet you he will absolutely do this again. Stupid is as stupid does.
Guest chapter 93 . 3/19
This story is disgusting
vaishnavi2006 chapter 55 . 3/19
M y mom was in one too she didn't leave because of me and my sister
vaishnavi2006 chapter 70 . 3/19
I hope this reviewe helps
vaishnavi2006 chapter 60 . 3/19
Oliver Harper sounds nice
vaishnavi2006 chapter 68 . 3/19
I love yar I really really love you please not Olivia she's a baby ana will be
okay but not Olivia she's just a baby please no
vaishnavi2006 chapter 66 . 3/19
my father I dead even though he's alive
vaishnavi2006 chapter 39 . 3/17
let that bitch fuk off
vaishnavi2006 chapter 23 . 3/16
big guns is probably Taylor ohhh wait hea lost him too
but in the end we know thatoops?! spoiler alert .?! how rude of me I'm sorry great chapter btw
vaishnavi2006 chapter 20 . 3/16
nope your not
vaishnavi2006 chapter 19 . 3/16
boo.. commetor of ch 8 and 15 you stink go right your own story you fucking retard!
you write lovly plz don't let these motha fuckas get into your head
vaishnavi2006 chapter 17 . 3/16
I love hi. but too bad I'm a second time reader lol
vaishnavi2006 chapter 10 . 3/16
no she's perfect
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