i'm crying. I'm supposed to be doing an project that's due tomorrow but i'm still on the first part. its 12:00. Idk what to do man I should've known this was coming but i just cant stop crying.

"Would he yell? Maybe threaten Arthur? Attack him in the parking lot, perhaps?"

I'm sorry but this reads exactly like "gonna cry? Gonna piss your pants maybe? Maybe shit and cum?"

WOW That hurt

oh god im crying now QAQ

creepypasta
awesome

ok if jeff the killer or laughing jack or ANY of the other pastas come up im going to have to shut my lap top and just laugh my ass off for an hour before i can continue reading

always watches
no eyes

You are fucking sick! The rape and him dieing was fucking brutal! I love horror but this was just sick!

Circle with an X. Slender man. I knew it.

WHAT THE FUCK AND THERE WAS NO MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH TAG? OMFG DUDE I THOUGHT I WAS GONNA GET A HAPPY ENDING BUT NAH, INSTEAD I GOT ALFRED GETTING RAPED BY OL' SLENDERMAN AND ARTHUR JUST WATCHIN. UGH AND YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER, I APPRECIATE YOUR WORK

Listen I loved the story from part 1 to part 6 ,but what the hell happened to part 7?! I would have loved for a less gory less violent ending. 8/10 for the story just the ending was not good

:( my heart is officially broken, oh God it was so saaad...uuuhhh... I'm crying shit out right know, but I really thank you for not developing their relationship more, or you know it would have been harder to part, and I would be crying with an asthma blower in my mouth, totally in an ambulance. I get too sensitive over these...
Anw, the storyline was AMazing, the details and everything made my heart pound, I just feel so sorry for Arthur... he'd be so lonely now :'(

This is crushing. The inevitability of it all tore my heart. All through the story, till the bitter end, I was hoping something would happen and they would save themselves and be alive and happy. Ugh, that was just...
By the way, while I was reading, I somehow made a paralel of the last chaper with planet earth and how we tear it apart but we watch on the sidelines thinking we can't do anything about it, and in a way that end was more horrifying because I was really putting my hopes on Arthur doing something, ya know? That probably sounds weird... anywho
I really loved your story!
-BMB

Dude you made me scared and cry at the same time... May you sleep peacefully dear Alfred... *sobs*

Damn you

Super late review but I just found this story. I'm not going to beat around the bush. You're a talented writer who knows how to rip someone's heart out and stab it! Truly beautiful story. I don't think I've cried this much in quite a while...

I'm just going to act like those ugly parts never happened and they actually both lived happy together forever::::))))
No, but um.. Hell, it was really good, ok? I shed tears. I read this in one sitting at 2am though I was planning to divide it, but I couldn't. Now, I really love that part near the end ''A place he found himself hoping existed for Alfred's sake.'' And this part kills me because I'm an atheist, and this is probably TMI but I've had people close to me die too, and I've found myself wanting Heaven to exist, regardless of what consequences that might have for me, so they can rest in peace.